|Reviews for Forgive Those Who Trespass|
| Drapine chapter 34 . 1/22
Hey there! This was absolutely amazing... and shocking!
First of all: You make everything so graphic, your writing style is fantastic and the way you made up that maze, all the detail, the inner meaning, I am an author and even I have no idea how you came up with all that! I mean, all this depth... astonishing.
But also: HOLY SHIT, GIRL (or man?)! Seriously, whats wrong with you? ;D You have the darkest and most disgusting imagination, I've ever read a story from and that certainly means something. The horrors in that maze! I dreamt bad for three nights! And I never have nightmares from movies or books.
I would have stopped, but DAMN! It was so thrilling, I just couldn't stop reading...
So it was not a nice story, but it was shocking and packing and had a really good ending. So... I'd say, I am looking forward to reading more from you.. but really? I don't think its good for me :D (That was a joke. I am addicted now, thank you very much :DD).
| KeikoHPfan chapter 34 . 12/14/2013
A beautifully dark story, hard but full of hope at the same time... Thanks a lot for this!
| Anonymous chapter 34 . 12/9/2013
This is the best drarry-ish story I've ever read. The plot was amazing and original, and for a story consisting of the impossible, it was incredibly realistic in the way they dealt in the situations. Words cannot describe how brilliant this story was. Good Job.
| Haru chapter 34 . 12/5/2013
Wow. This is the very first time I review anything here, but gods, I'm so in love with your wtiting. This story was so, so, so precious I'm speechless. I can't find neither a word of positive opinion nor negative. I just loved it, like all of your stories, that is. Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us!
| Carson chapter 34 . 10/20/2013
You are an absolutely incredible writer with a incredibly twisted mind! Loved every bit of it, I couldn't stop reading!
| indirequi chapter 34 . 10/15/2013
I just finished reading the story again. I don't know how, but I kinda always forget how...detailed some of the torture descriptions are, good think I like gore ;) . I like this story even better than the movie (Eden Log) it's based on. Well done :)
| kagayaspirits chapter 16 . 10/6/2013
I love this Water Room! Automatic sorting of human parts sounds like an amazing idea! This is just getting better and better. Fantastic job you did!
| kagayaspirits chapter 3 . 10/6/2013
Wow, the room of flesh. That's pretty much my ultimate favourite horror scene. Am so happy that for once there's a fanfic depicting what I see as horror. Human experiments! Mutilation! Warm dead flesh! They're all my favourite topics.
Let's not even talk about the human chain. Lovely!
I look forward to finish this fic, it's been really nice so far. Cheers!
| LifeIsJustADreamForTheDead chapter 34 . 9/26/2013
Omg... Just - wow. That was so disturbing, intense, captivating... And it must have been so difficult to write. My respect for you continues to grow.
| bethi13212 chapter 34 . 8/28/2013
| BlueSecretGarden chapter 34 . 7/5/2013
As always, this was just awesome! I loved it , I cried and I feared and I shuddered, and I tensed and laughed and smiled and everything with them, it was like a rollercoasrter of emotions and that was just BRILLIANT ! Thank you so much for this story, thank for you sharing your talent with us! Hell, thank to your parents to have conceived you ! xD (okay, overkill, but you got the idea :p )
| BlueSecretGarden chapter 6 . 7/3/2013
Hey! me again! okay; First; this story is awesome! As expected from you of course, all your stories are awesome! But I'm confused, from the beginning I thought that draco couldn't speak , not even clicking his tongue. And here you say, "Malfoy cried out, and Harry whipped his head around", how come since he supposedly can't utter a sound? And later "Malfoy gave a little yelp" , so is he pretending to be mute? Or did I misunderstood? :/ Anyway , great story! I go back to the next chapter
| khendraja-aro chapter 34 . 5/19/2013
Excellent et si je ne m'abuse, c'est l'arbre séphérotique qui vous a servi d'inspiration pour la structure du labyrinthe ... Cette histoire est géniale et son obscurité maniée avec art. Quand un être passe par les chemins de cet arbre, il meurt et renait différemment, c'est un peu comme la magie d'Harry qui existe sous une autre forme au final. Merci pour ce texte.
| Saraid chapter 34 . 4/30/2013
Fantastic! I've read more of your stories now and you're going in my Favorite Author list, for sure. I'm pants at reviewing, so if I don't I like the story more than a little. :)
| Carling chapter 34 . 4/28/2013
Well that was great that we got to see the healing and the therapy process. As for Harry's reaction to anal sex, as a good and close friend to several gay men, I've heard it openly confided some feel as squicky about the idea and/or actual act as some heterosexuals do, especially being mere muggles without access to those convenient purifying charms! Others have health problems or medical conditons that preclude it.
So, it is not a necessary part of intimacy for many gay male couples by mutual agreement. If Harry ended up never being at ease with this practice, it's important he understand he has a choice and rejecting that form of intercourse doesn't make him any less of a "normal" gay man. But it might mean Draco is not the right long term partner for him if that form of sexual expression is important to Draco.
Having gone through the story I'm a little disappointed to never find out what ever became of Jason, Draco's lover. He seemed so very significant in giving Draco confidence in all aspects of life. I'm surprised Harry didn't think to ask if Jason was completely out of the picture. Maybe Draco's never ending Potter obsession drove Jason away?
The story was brutally gory. I knew what that stew was. I think pretty well every reader saw that one coming.