Reviews for Harry Potter And The Betrayal
Raven Evans-Black chapter 15 . 6/8
okay why is this labeled mpreg if it isnt
Marshmallowmann chapter 15 . 3/24
I really like that the quality of your stories have greatly improved from this.
sjrodgers23 chapter 15 . 11/10/2016
love it. now to read your sequel thank you
nightpurr1 chapter 5 . 9/20/2016
I know I have committed on this story in the pass I hope you don't get tired of hearing the same old thing but for it being one of you older sorry I must say, the old saying. . . .It's an old one but a dang good one. I know you have wrote better ones but this one will always be one of your good ones as far as I am concern.
I know I have said this be fore but thinks for the great entertainment. I am standing and clapping for you.
Your biggest fan, nightpurr
099 chapter 6 . 8/24/2016
I would enjoy this fanfiction more if it didn't have such horrible punctuation and grammar. The run on sentences are the worst.
GoSlytherins chapter 7 . 7/24/2016
Awful grammar.
Make Harry join Voldy
thephoenixandthedragon4ever chapter 15 . 7/12/2016
I like that they one but hope you made the evil light side pay in the sequel.
Dagger-Seishin chapter 15 . 6/29/2016
Oooooo k lol sounds about right tho
marybeth.hp7 chapter 15 . 6/12/2016
yea! Time for the sequel!
Jissy2013 chapter 15 . 4/14/2016
love it great story :)
Jissy2013 chapter 12 . 4/14/2016
love it so good :) :)
Jissy2013 chapter 11 . 4/14/2016
so coo love it
Jissy2013 chapter 9 . 4/13/2016
love it a really fun chapter :)
Jissy2013 chapter 8 . 4/13/2016
I love what Harry said to sev omg. these story so exciting
Jissy2013 chapter 6 . 4/13/2016
i really hate Dumbledore _
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