Reviews for Harry Potter And The Betrayal
thephoenixandthedragon4ever chapter 15 . 7/12
I like that they one but hope you made the evil light side pay in the sequel.
Dagger-Seishin chapter 15 . 6/29
Oooooo k lol sounds about right tho
marybeth.hp7 chapter 15 . 6/12
yea! Time for the sequel!
Jissy2013 chapter 15 . 4/14
love it great story :)
Jissy2013 chapter 12 . 4/14
love it so good :) :)
Jissy2013 chapter 11 . 4/14
so coo love it
Jissy2013 chapter 9 . 4/13
love it a really fun chapter :)
Jissy2013 chapter 8 . 4/13
I love what Harry said to sev omg. these story so exciting
Jissy2013 chapter 6 . 4/13
i really hate Dumbledore _
Jissy2013 chapter 5 . 4/13
love it
Yaoi-Lover-100 chapter 8 . 3/13
this story is amazing. you are officially one of my favorite authors
RayvnAshes2 chapter 5 . 2/9
Earlier in the chapter you mentioned Hermione and Ron saying how Harry didn't care about Sirius' death, and then it shows the mangy mutt perfectly alive. That's...kind of a big continuity error. Not that I haven't made quite a few similar ones in my own stories, but I'm just pointing it out.
Guest chapter 9 . 1/28
RONALD WEASLEY THE BASTARD!
schakar08 chapter 15 . 1/21
Love your stories! Don't know how many times I read this story! Good job!
Mie Mie chapter 15 . 11/12/2015
I wish you would re write this. It's a wonderful storyline but the timing and grammar are awful. Especially knowing what a wonderful writer i know your capable of being.
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