Reviews for Marauding Dragon: Secrets
Rhea Silverkeys chapter 2 . 11/29/2007
I like the "what-if" scene Draco had with Lucius, I really hope Lucius gets brave enough to changes sides! Please let his love for family and Draco overcome his cowardness to Voldemort (because, come on, we all know he's only sticking with Voldemort now because he's terrified of him).

Love the scene with Lucius and Narcissa, and Lucius looking at the photo album as well. So sweet!

I do hope Ron gets some support from his family, perhaps Percy or Charlie? (The twins are the twins and will be cruel, but the older siblings like Charlie or Bill seem like they'd treat Ron just the same, although they're not exactly at home all the time)

The last few lines were priceless )
Rhea Silverkeys chapter 1 . 11/29/2007
Ouch. Poor Ronniekins, I can completely understand how he feels. The content of the scene with Lucius and Draco was good, I think, I like the reasons given for Lucius' actions and what he wants Draco to do, but I thought the style could be improved on...some of the dialogue just didn't flow for me...
Airlady chapter 2 . 11/28/2007
It really is hard for parents to deal with children who think differently but you showed it well.
Hebi R chapter 2 . 11/28/2007
I wonder what the elder Makfoy's would say if they knew Sirius had been listening to the whole discussion. I also wonder if Arthur knows about the friendship between Ginny, Luna, and Draco. Has he at least realized that the Twins are unlikely to ever befriend a stuck-up Muggle hating DE Jr?
Solunar chapter 2 . 11/28/2007
Ginny Harry or Ginny Draco? Can't be Ginny Nott right? O_O

AW baby draco sounded so cute... can we have more lucius flashbacks of draco? :P:P
Solunar chapter 1 . 11/28/2007
:( POOR DRACO! o. and Dragon heard all that. I wonder if his opinion of Lucius and Narcissa has changed any.
Dimrilla chapter 2 . 11/28/2007
Perhaps it's possible that Lucius can switch sides? Narcissa at least does seem adamant to avoid a situation similar to this with Sirius and his family...

Theo hanging around with Ginny... hmm- given the fact that he has Riddle's diary it can be dangerous for her. I wonder whether You intend to let the diary possess Ginny (as in the "Chamber of secrets") or someone else (Theo?)...
NATWEST chapter 2 . 11/27/2007
great chapter, I like how nacissia said to lucius she will not throw her son out. So you better sort yourself out.
piwqefjk chapter 2 . 11/27/2007
Great chapter - I really like the way you're showing the conflict Lucius and Narcissa are feeling, as opposed to making them unfeeling "go Voldemort!" Death Eaters.
TripleC Squared chapter 2 . 11/27/2007
Ah, yay! New chapter already. Essays must have tapped themselves out quicker than you thought! Hope you had a great break. Lucius needs to get wapped with a rolled up newspaper! Or a Large tome of the sort Theo would enjoy! He's being...stubbrone. Poor Draco...Where is Sirius, he needs to be there to support hte kid! Theo interaction with the Weasley's is cute, I am so adoring that chracter. I really am. He's just wonderful. Can't wait to see Harry added back into the mix! Take care.
Heroine of the Valley chapter 1 . 11/27/2007
wow, you're on a roll here, aren't you? sequel up already!
kalathetrumpeter chapter 1 . 11/26/2007
Hi, someone here. Very good, very good. I really appreciate Lucius' approach to Draco. My only qualm- and I've said it before- is that they seem just a little too mature for their age, especially Draco. He seems a little too strong, especially starting when he says "Voldemort is evil. . ."

It is VERY difficult for young kids take a stand against parents that they love, even when they have strong misgivings. I don't think he would speak as definitively as he does. If he's this self-assured now, what's he going to be like when he's seventeen?

Anyway, rant over. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
NATWEST chapter 1 . 11/26/2007
I love this squel. Will Draco leave also. Theo I feel for him. He being used and it's look bad.
piwqefjk chapter 1 . 11/25/2007
First Theo, then Draco. At least Harry's relatives don't care, although that's depressing in and of itself. Huzzah for Mrs Weasley's mothering instincts xD
DragonsTales chapter 1 . 11/25/2007
Great start! And I have got to say that reading 2 chapters at once was extremely satisfying :) I love your characterization of Lucius so much! He's not necessarily a bad person, just has some bad ideas. Waiting (im)patiently for your next chapter!
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