Reviews for Random Organization XIII |
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![]() ![]() ![]() (sorry I took so long to review, I got grounded) Lols, Nice! XDD Can't wait for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think this story is frekin funny. So to make it better...include TACOS! Good job and keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG I love my OC! She's Funny! Nice chap, can't wait for the next one! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ha-ha Nice! I wouldn't mind having a nobody in here. She's got blonde hair that covers half of her left eye, she enjoys playing video games, likes to listen to music, and she's joined forces with the organization. |
![]() ![]() ![]() XD These are great! "Why is the rum gone?" Yeah, I know what you're on about! XD |
![]() ![]() Nice! Can't wait for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() XD Nice! Can't wait for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lmao! Nice! Can't wait for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey! I get to be the first review, yay! Maybe this'll make up for my other really suckish review. I swear I didn't mean it in a bad way. I was laughing my head off the entire time I was reading this! I don't usually read a whole lot of fluff, which just makes me love it even more when I do read it. I think it's really cute that you portrayed Roxas as such a kid, which he really is among the rest of the Organization. You're Roxas/Larxene/Axel love triangle thing is really funny, as well. I've always wondered how some things would have ended up if the CoM characters were still in KH II. So, overall great job and I really hope you get more reviews and continue this . |