Reviews for A Village Hidden In Hope |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hello! I just found your story It seems very good to me, it is more one of the best written since you do not follow the "base" format that the others place as if it were a script for the movie. I hope that when you have some time you will resume his writing as it has a lot of potential. Let the force flow to give you ideas but always use a logical guideline Remember that every good story must have a beginning, a core and an end. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damnit please update this it's so damn good |
![]() ![]() ![]() "I was conducting some research on the women's side of the Tattooine hot-springs-" That's s might be the best quote i read all month xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please continue with the story, it's very good, please don't give up, a story that really has no comparison. I can tell you since I am a big fan of this type of story and the truth is that they have no comparison. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Too bad they didn't continue this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Woe! Woe unto me! Truly my suffering is absolute! Thus grand story, this grand tale sure to bring me Hope...Gone! Into the desert it walked with no sign of return! But a sign of hope |
![]() ![]() ![]() It’s still beautiful. I love rereading this |
![]() ![]() ![]() That ending lol xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sometimes I still don't get the prophecy. It's kind of fucked up. Anakin bringing balance basically meant he had to eliminate both Orders for balance to occur. No Sith. No Jedi. To be fair they brought warfare every time they clashed. In a catastrophic way... but at the same time... Genocide... kind of a slippery slope there to say this was a good thing Anakin did... |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol what did Naruto say about Jiraiya xD Not gonna lie I think Qui-Gon and Jiraiya would get along famously xD though I don't think Qui-Gon is a pervert xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hah! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah this sounds like something Naruto would do. Great stroy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() One day this will be updated. ONE DAY. |
![]() ![]() ![]() man what a spot for a story to die in lots of funny humor so far and a good story |