One day this will be updated.

ONE DAY.

man what a spot for a story to die in lots of funny humor so far and a good story

Please update soon I'm dieing to know what happens next

fucking shit kill the jedi

This was really good

I just watched episode 1, season 2 of The Mandalorian and cause of thisI knew what the krayt dragon was! I’m going to have to re-read that chapter again with the new visuals in my head.
The show left the pearls as an Easter-egg to reward the fans in the know. So my parents were like ‘wtf’ when tuskens pull out the pearl out, and I was sitting next to them on the couch and grinning like an idiot.

Please update soon

You know I really enjoyed this story so far. At first I thought that you had written Anakin as a whiny brat to set up a Naruto Padme Romance but then I realized something. You wrote him as a real ten year old. Not a caricature someone who does not understand children put together but a real 10 year old. I really like your story. It is too bad it will likely never be updated. I had not realized it was published in 2007. It was a pleasant story that gives me ideas. I will probably wonder what will happen next but I suppose that is not to be. If this review reaches you I hope you are well.

Loved it... Thank you... Take Care...

What a shame, this was a good story. Too bad you went the retard route and abandoned it like all the other retards writing on this site. Feel ashamed of yourself.

I really enjoyed the humor, the jab on Yoda's fat ass,hope to read more in the future.

Another very interesting story a shame to see that you've mainly stopped writing but I hope whatever your doing now that your doing well.

Hahaha lol. It’s just... Maito Gai’s dream retirement home. That cracked me up.

Thanks for the hard work love the story _

please continue this story