|Reviews for A Village Hidden In Hope|
| Sora Hoshi chapter 6 . 9/7/2009
This story is awesome! XD I love how you have it so that the stories told in like a reflective type manor, it's really creative! XD Ero-sennin finding Naruto is great! I hope you update soon and have an easier time writing than it seemed you did in this last one, from what I can deduct from the AN's note you left...
Anyways, have fun, and I'm totally favoriting this one!
| thepenultimatefailure chapter 6 . 9/7/2009
Hooray for updates! I loved this chapter, Anakin and Naruto make adorable pseudo-brothers. You write action scenes very well, and I'm also enjoying the presentation of the plot. Thank you for writing this story, I hope you get a chance to update soon, barring any porcupine related difficulties
| ominix chapter 6 . 9/7/2009
great job, keep it up.
| Deritine chapter 6 . 9/7/2009
Yay- awesome update. I love how you weave in different timelines so seamlessly.
| Senyor Fier Mensheir chapter 6 . 9/7/2009
Naruto is da man! WooT!
| dreamlifter chapter 6 . 9/7/2009
hahaha, very fun and action filled chapter to read. really glad the story is ongoing. Love how you put in dark tone in the end with anakin not comming down.
The ending joke was hilarious! I didn't know if Qui Gon is another Jiraiya or if he just said that cause of all the things he's heard of Jiraiya from naruto. Very well done!
| ww chapter 6 . 9/6/2009
This is a really great crossover. At first, I couldn't believe that a Star Wars/Naruto crossover would work, but it actually does. Naruto's thoughts when first arriving on Tatooine make perfect sense (It's got to be Sand village! The aliens are ninjas!), and Anakin's response to him was similarly good. (It was nice and complicated - Naruto's his friend, but he's jealous, ect.)
The way you tell the story with flashbacks is very effective. And I'm very excited to see where you're going with this. (Especially because the jedi have arrived!)
| me chapter 6 . 9/6/2009
I assume naruto sees epic force powers and assumes they are ninja using jutsu?
| Taliath chapter 6 . 9/6/2009
Brilliant. Just simply brilliant.
Please, update soon!
| Magic Crystal Rose chapter 6 . 9/6/2009
Wonderful! I've certainly never seen this type of crossover before but you make it seem so natural. I can't wait for the Jedi/Naruto interactions.
| Kesshichan chapter 6 . 9/6/2009
sweet you updated! naruto vs. kyrat dragonepic
loved this chapter
| The-Eighth-Sin chapter 6 . 9/6/2009
Awesome sauce. friggin love this story.
| Beboots chapter 6 . 9/6/2009
Thank you very much for updating! :D
I really like how Naruto's teaching (or attempting to teach, anyway) Anikin. It would make sense that Naruto knows what he's doing, just not how to teach it properly, you now? I also like how they have to use a fake knife to placate Shmi.
Also - protective!Naruto awesome. :) I'm sure we'll be seeing more of that soon...
I love what this says about Watto's state of mind: "He’d done it for a full year after he’d made her cook for him, but it seemed like she wasn’t going to carry out a revenge scheme on her former owners’ behalf. Tonight he checked." XD
"He pulled a data pad off a shelf and tried to find something to bet on." Yes, yes - console thyself! ;)
"Naruto was crouching on the ceiling above him. The boy was dragging a knife across the adobe." Very nice image. ;)
"Watto knew enough about humans to know their faces scrunched when they thought hard." I like how this is stated outright. Sometimes, we forget that these aliens have different physiologies and mannerisms.
I love how matter-of-fact Naruto is about finding a dragon. XD
And damn... that flash-forward what-if possibility that Anakin sees... ;_;
I'm also happy that the Kage Bunshin have made a reappearance! :D Huzzah! I love it when they're used in a useful (and badass) way like this. :) I like that you described how various ones died. I also like how the Wookie is still fiercely loyal to Naruto, and willing to help. :)
"Plus, he couldn’t picture a sand person killing a dragon with just a gafi stick and the slow-moving oversized goat creatures they rode around on." Very true. Also, THIS is very in-character, for what we know of them: "They sometimes shrieked and took pot shots at him with gafi sticks, but they did that to everyone who wasn’t another sand person." I was very amused by the following line, though: "Naruto liked them for their lack of prejudice." Yep, they just hate everyone.
"Naruto didn’t really have a plan, but with no one around to see his clones, he supposed he could try just about everything and see what worked." So... in... character... XD No plan, just throw bunshin at it!
"He held out a blaster rifle and the clone took it with a grin." Nice image. Also, I think that it makes sense that cloned projectile weapons wouldn't work. "Its roar was loud enough to burst the clone." Interesting!
I also like Tre's backstory. :) I assume he's an original character? A believeable one!
"He looked over at the nearest clone and tried to communicate the idea. The clone pretended it couldn’t hear him. Naruto glared." AWESOME. I mean, seriously - one of the things I love about Naruto's clones are that they're all HIM, and sometimes don't cooperate. Excellent. "Naruto’s clones snatched him out of the way, tossing him from one to the other to get him clear." And yet... yay teamwork!
Also, Kyuubi's solution to everything kill them all? Very in-character. :) "What’s in it for me? / “You get to kill something really, really big."" XDD Excellent suggestion! Naruto knows how to manipulate his parasite. ;)
"He roared at the dragon. It flinched back." EPIC.
"He wasn’t an expert in anatomy of alien dragons, but he figured if it had a spine." A fair enough assumption.
"Anakin though it was more likely that Naruto was returning with a dragon’s kidney stone, but didn’t say anything aloud." Wouldn't that be so Naruto, though? ;)
"“Do I look like someone who runs?” Watto said, kicking his stumpy legs against the side of the tank he sat on." XD Trufax.
The image of the triumphant, returning Naruto? That Jiraiya can see on video? Very good. :)
Ooh... and so this means that Naruto (and his village) will be safe from the Sand People? AWESOME... "They’re just here to get some water for these big furry guys, and then they’ll go back to yelling angry things in the desert." XD Excellent line. You've seriously meshed these worlds so well!
“I picked you out this one, ‘cause it looks like your head.” XDD Excellent choice, Naruto!
I also like how it was Naruto who freed all of these slaves. I like your description of this movement. :)
"Jiraiya decided he’d have to get himself invited to a Hutt bash. They sounded like they knew how to party." XDD Very in-character.
So... in conclusion... You are awesome! Your writing is too! I seriously love how original you've made this fic. You put other crossover writers to shame. :)
| Parselmaster chapter 6 . 9/6/2009
Forever is nothing is this is what I must wait for. :P Good work yet again.
| GoldenRat chapter 6 . 9/6/2009
Nice! Naruto buys Anakin and Shimi their freedom, finally.