|Reviews for A Village Hidden In Hope|
| FohkuKohgeki chapter 2 . 3/29/2008
Good work so far, can't wait for more.
Wookiepeedia - starwars./wiki/Main_Page
is another good reference if you should need it.
| Mackon chapter 2 . 3/29/2008
Great stuff, looking forward to the Butt kicking update soon!
Thanks for sharing.
| Ninja Magic chapter 2 . 3/29/2008
Yay! I am so happy you updated, and the chapter was good. I like your style of alternating past and present. I think all the characters are in character, which is to your credit. I also like how Anakin was so sneaky. I am really looking forward to the next chapter, but I really hope it is less of a wait than last time. I am excited about how this fic is going to develop. Again, great chapter, and update soon.
| XTakaX27 chapter 2 . 3/29/2008
As much as this was un-butt kicking, I really liked it! Too often, authors jump straight to battle scenes (that they can't write...Did I say that?) and leave out the important bits in the middle that explain everything. I like how you've mixed the future and the past (or is it present and past? Present and future? W/e) to give readers an idea of the story. I can't wait for you next update! (Especially since I never thought you'd update again...)
| The-Eighth-Sin chapter 2 . 3/29/2008
| destroying tokyo chapter 2 . 3/29/2008
Excellent! It's hard for me to believe that you're actually pulling off a Naruto/SW fic...and doing it well, too. This is pretty amazing. Update soon, please. :D
| The Great Rick chapter 2 . 3/29/2008
It's still alive!
| Megaolix chapter 2 . 3/29/2008
You got me hooked. Now you need to make sure I'll always stay hooked. Because frankly, it's quite frustrating to see a good story get discontinued.
How fast are your chapters gonna be? I doubt you'll be going at a slow pace, considering you alternate between past and present. Besides, I doubt you want to write remake of the movies either.
Well, I,ll be waiting for the second part. And don,t worry about chapters being. The only rule I see with that is to try to stay around a certain number of word or slowly increasing it if you want to write more.
Keep up the good work.
| Beboots chapter 2 . 3/29/2008
Yay! Thank you very much for updating! :D
"...suspecting that at some point they’d have to drop their illusions and reveal their true forms, but they remained freakish and impossible..." XD Yep, I think that that would be my initial reaction, too.
Hmm, so Anakin is a pseudo prophet... interesting... I also really like how this was phrased: "we came to claim you before the desert could.”
I also love your Jiraiya to pieces. "Not wanting to be rude, he leered back."
I liked Anakin's motivations for helping Naruto - because his mum would expect him too. D'aww... how did he turn so evil? ;_;
I loved Akakin's manipulation of Watto... and the guys Watto bought the racer from. XD He's so clever! I also like how you balanced his optimism with his mum's skepticism about whether or not the kid in orange will live.
I like the weight of this statement: "They spent the day working on the machine she was sure would get her son killed." ;_; Poor Shimi...
I think it's rather in character for Shimi to assume that Naruto is just a humanoid species of alien, which actually quite neatly explains away some of the stranger aspects of him, doesn't it?
I really liked the language barrier you had going on - and how Naruto understood a bit more than they thought he did. :)
"Maito Gai’s dream retirement home" XD It's interesting that none are painted blue, although I suppose that Shimi's reasoning makes sense.
Although, I do wonder now how Jiraiya can be understood by Shimi... I mean, did Shimi learn Japanese from Naruto, or is Jiraiya just a linguist?
Don't worry, it wasn't too slow! :D It was an awesome chapter, full of squee-ness. Although, now I'm really looking forward to what you dub "butt kicking". XD Please post it soon! In any case, thank you very much once again for updating. Rock on, and keep up the good work! :D
| Ninja Magic chapter 1 . 3/24/2008
Please update this story soon.
| Ninja Magic chapter 1 . 3/10/2008
Unfortunately I can't send multiple signed reviews, so I will do this for now. As you could tell from my story that I am writing, I am a big fan of the whole Naruto/Star Wars crossover idea, and I am overjoyed to see another one on this site. It is an untapped crossover idea that no one has done before. I wish you luck on this fanfiction venture, and I look forward to reading it. Please update as soon as you can. In terms of questions I have for you, 1. What star wars timeframe is this story in exactly? 2. By what date do you expect to have the chapter done? 3. Will the Star Wars and Naruto information you present in your fic be canon, or least the most a fanfiction is possible to be canon? 4. Will any other Naruto characters be in your fanfiction? And finally 5. What is your view on Chakra and the Force. Are the same, are they related, or are they completely different? Also what is the difference in power between a ninja and a jedi? Good luck with your fic, and may the Force be with you.
| Mistress DragonFlame chapter 1 . 3/7/2008
...OMFG, this is funny. Like, this could be the next... some funny story! :0 I don't even like Star Wars.
Dx Get to up-dating! *smacks with newspaper*
| HarbingerLady chapter 1 . 2/12/2008
certainly a shock to hear a stranger from wherever he is, called him Ero-sennin of all things. It's Tatooine then. Btw what's the timeline? I know that Shmi is Anakin's mom, so the timeline is around that. Is the time difference between the worlds the same? Because if it is, Naruto should be 15 or 16 years old, right?
| Dragon chapter 1 . 2/10/2008
| enderverse chapter 1 . 1/31/2008
awesome! I hate story's where naruto isnt trying to become Kage and in this one it seems like he already is.