Reviews for On His Part
WhimsyUsagi chapter 3 . 6/19/2013
I honestly believe that they disrespected Rukia far worse by going through like nothing happened. The more honorable thing would have been to be honest and take the consequences, rather than lie to themselves and to her for hundreds of years. That is just plain awful and sad.
cellaria chapter 3 . 1/16/2013
well that was just dumb. really good till the part at the end but this makes no sense at all..? lol i swear you never even mentioned that renji even thought about rukia like that much less was with rukia? & if you did it wasn't more than a sentence..? he & byakuya obviously like each other & he specifically said he doesn't like rukia and that would make it also.. a renji/rukia fic so that should be mentioned since i wouldn't have even read this ugh so annoying.. plus if he was with her.. he already cheated.. & marrying someone you don't like or want doesn't make that a good decision.. especially when you already want someone else lol not to mention you never mentioned it in the story before either when everyone was making out with renji including rukia? so that makes even less sense. how about you just erase the stupid ending & write the renbya sex at the end that was supposed to be there
taydev chapter 1 . 9/6/2012
Ok. I know this story is very old but I have to leave a comment.

First, I just want to say that I love BOTH ByaRen and RenRuki. Both pairings are plausible due to their history and/or interactions with each other. You can tell they all really care for one another in their own way.

Now, this may seem harsh but I have to be honest; this story was good until the very end. Seriously, WTF? I understand it would be dishonorable because of their relationships with Hisana and Rukia, but BYAREN ALREADY HAD SEX, THEREFORE, RENJI ALREADY CHEATED AND BYAKUYA DID WRONG BECAUSE RENJI IS HIS SISTER'S MAN! Why even have them give into the lust for each other only to have a RENRUKI ending? Maybe it should have been written without RenRuki, or if RenRuki, why not just make a sweet yet torturous fic about the sexual tension between the two men without having them give in to lust? Also, Renji is STILL wrong for marrying Rukia when he continues to hold those feelings for Byakuya. Having them marry in the end did not right their wrongs. I'm sorry, but the ending made zero sense, along with your justification for it. This had so much potential.
Phoenix Dysis chapter 3 . 9/20/2011
The ending makes me sad and upset...

...wanna make a sequel/alternate story line to make me happy?

Gahhhhhh I was reading and I was like "yaaay they like each other!" then I read the ending and I was like "IT CAN'T END LIKE THIS. IT'S SO DEPRESSING!"
Skyrere chapter 3 . 9/8/2011
Such a bittersweet ending... XD

Well done.

I applaud you for keeping them true to their honor because honor is everything.
Skyrere chapter 2 . 9/8/2011
hahahahahaa... That was freakin awesome and funny as hell at the end there.

Well done. XD
Skyrere chapter 1 . 9/8/2011
Get me some Tea...

hehehehehe.

you are awesome.
Hidden Star chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
:D :D Oh, delicious. Kuchiki Byakuya is like so sweet in his inexperience! *favourite. :)#

Helen
Hidden Star chapter 3 . 1/31/2011
I would have preferred Renji to stay with Byakuya. It's too late for that, I suppose. Nevertheless, a really nice story as far as I am concerned.

You should go on, I really enjoy reading your fictions. :)
Byakuya-Renji chapter 3 . 8/15/2010
i love it but the ending...no i hate it lol byakuya shoulod be with renji...not renji with rukia lol i am sure she would have been happy for them both
Gryphalcon chapter 3 . 8/7/2010
Regret is hard to let go of.

For alternative mushiness on the same lines, try "stunted forward motion" by peroxide pest. Do you read as much as you write?
Tu Es Chicago chapter 3 . 7/6/2010
A sexy beginning, a SEXIER middle, and then an adorable yet bittersweet ending! I love the RenRuki engagement, though the ByaRen was INCREDIBLY hot! I dont think there was a single word of this fic I didnt love! I know I'm getting annoying with all thse reviews, but you;re simply a fantastic writer!
Liv chapter 3 . 2/7/2010
PERFECT ENDING!

BUT NO /3 BYAKUYA AND RENJI WERE MEANT TO BE /3 /3 /3

AKLDFAS;LKFSDKLJ TT_TT
lightofdawn22 chapter 3 . 11/29/2009
I absolutely loved it! But the ending made me sad...and I loved the parts about Hisana, that was especially sweet.
LunaticV chapter 3 . 11/29/2009
the hell?

you can't just make a story about ByaRen then ending it with a RenRu at the very last paragraph! X(

it was clear that the two men wanted each other, and Renji even said that asking Rukia out couldn't help take his mind off Byakuya...

also, 'cheating'? were they even together in the first place? i thought Rukia was more towards Ichigo? (in the original anime/manga)

aaw... it was nice, though... just don't like the ending...
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