Reviews for Three
Guest chapter 22 . 4/24
I still have no idea why this fic is in SasuSaku's archive. No yaoi warning? Disgusting.
Illulian chapter 22 . 3/2
This seems like an interesting read, though I have to admit the formatting makes the conversations unintuitive to follow, which means the reader has to guess who's saying what, which breaks the flow and believability of the story. It's as if we're reading a summary of thoughts mumbled together between characters, only we're confused as heck. Is there a reason you decided against using quote marks in your syntax? I think they would clear up a lot confusion.
yukinagato99 chapter 9 . 12/23/2015
chapter 9 WHY? JUST WHY?

great story and i didn't expect that plot twist.
sweetsakshi3631 chapter 11 . 8/14/2015
This is one of the most incredibly written fics. Credit to both the writer AND the tanslator who has done a supreme job of keeping the essence of the storyI would have expected more reviews
ariviechan chapter 22 . 7/26/2015
Hi,

In the beginnng I liked how sad it started, but I honestly didn't expect the "Gayness"! Really? Well, you or the author of this story either must me non-straight or an Itachi fan. The ending sucked a little. :(
Jochelle chapter 9 . 4/15/2015
What the fuck is going on?!
The Blaze of Hestia chapter 8 . 3/22/2015
well written-
The Blaze of Hestia chapter 7 . 3/22/2015
well written,
The Blaze of Hestia chapter 6 . 3/22/2015
well written;
The Blaze of Hestia chapter 4 . 3/22/2015
well written/.
The Blaze of Hestia chapter 3 . 3/22/2015
well written/
The Blaze of Hestia chapter 2 . 3/22/2015
well written...
The Blaze of Hestia chapter 1 . 3/22/2015
well written
Chiqui188 chapter 22 . 12/11/2014
... I don't if its me who can't understand completely the english but this is so weird and I think that I love this fanfic but omg... I don't even know what the hell just happened... Please someone help me...omg this fanfic is so awesome but I can't even... Omg I'm fangirling...
Uchihalover81 chapter 22 . 9/27/2014
Your disgusting for writing this nasty yaoi incestuous shit! I'm gonna go puke! Absolutely disgusting!
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