Reviews for The Pirate In The Doll
Nerisel chapter 6 . 4/5/2014
THAT ENDING
WHUT
WHUT
DID NOT SEE THAT COMING
AT ALL
IT HIT ME LIKE A WRECKING BALL
WHUT HOLY SHIT

After finishing this story, I stand by my original assessment. This story is the BEST I've read from the fandom yet. Plot driven, characters fleshed out, suspenseful, absolutely gripping with every word. It had me internally (and externally) screaming at the characters for so many reasons. I was screaming at Sanji for his stupid pride and lack of common sense for buying a creepy ass doll (which was later explained beautifully why he did it), at Zoro /for/ his common sense unlike Sanji (your common sense betrays you here Zoro, this shitty duo of devastation), and the duo striking again for arguing with each other when there's a menace in the room (what the hell guys) AND ZORO FOR LEAVING (DON'T ABANDON SANJI, NOT AGAAAAAAAAIN I BELIEVE IN YOU ZORO SOB) and then how Robin appeared and I thought it was a lil suspicious like one of those witches in stories that appears too conveniently to instruct the hero on what they should do and the flash of hope AND THEN THE UTTER DESPAIR. AFTER HAVING MY HEART IN MY THROAT FOR SO LONG YOU'VE FINALLY MANAGED TO MAKE ME HACK IT OUT.

READ IT IN ONE GO. SUCH A FUCKING PERFECT STORY.
Nerisel chapter 2 . 4/5/2014
I'm forgetting how to breathe. This story is damn INTENSE.
Nerisel chapter 1 . 4/5/2014
Goddamn, THIS STORY HAS ME BY THE /THROAT/. I was only half way through the first chapter and I could already tell that this was going to be my favourite One Piece fanfic of all the ones that I've read and will ever read. I don't normally read Horror because so few people can do it justice, sometimes it just drags on and on and on until the frightening aspect is all but gone but with this story; the pacing is just right. It moves quickly without skimping the details and I can't count the number of times my breath hitched and screamed at Sanji to listen to his instincts and OMG bloody idiot, why did you buy that creepy doll for?

XD Just had to get that off my chest. Now, onto the rest of the story. *rubs hands together in glee*
denOden chapter 6 . 1/14/2014
God, the ending is PERFECT! now I wonder about another AU which somewhat like a sequel to this story but with happy ending, you know, simply because I want to see Law as Robin's brother, a warlock or a wizard, and the most important is as Kid's boyfriend, lolz, thank you for a such wonderful story!
kage999 chapter 2 . 11/1/2013
Wtf if sanji was normal he'd have slept in zoro's room. Seriously I don't get how seeing an indent on your bed and seeing no visible person there...I would sell the apartment or go sleep somewhere else immediately
PiratePigeon chapter 6 . 5/27/2013
I'm sad right now :(
It was a really, really great story, but the ending was so sad...
random person chapter 6 . 4/23/2013
0.0 Wha. . .?
seatides chapter 6 . 4/16/2013
So uh...6 years since you wrote this fic, and I finally stumbled upon it haha.
I really loved your story. It was so...horrific. And wonderfully suspenseful. I thought your characters were done really well...well, with the exception of Gin because he's supposed to be insane... but otherwise, I thought you kept to their characters.
Buuuut the ending had me so unsatisfied! Don't get me wrong, I loved the twist, it's just that I was hoping that Zoro and Sanji would be free of the curse... I mean, they're basically doomed to repeat their fate for an eternity. Every life they're going to live, they're going to meet, fall in love, deny their feelings, and just when they could be freed (if Robin was telling the truth about Zoro's confession unbinding Sanji from Gin - still not really sure how that works either, but I guess that's the appeal of mystery, eh?), they get tricked into another cycle! So it's not just a tragic lifetime, it's a tragic eternity! I wanted them to at least have a bittersweet ending! Like, maybe Sanji was still "alive" like he was in that past incident, Zoro confesses, has his feelings returned silently, and hopefully Robin was telling the truth and then the curse would break, Sanji dies, and they would finally be able to love each other in their next life...Not...not this soul crushing tragedy T_T.
Anyway, even though your romantic moments were very brief, they were very sweet at the same time. The whole caress and slap thing was adorable.
Regardless of how the ending was not to my preferences, I thought your story was awesomely done, brutally suspenseful, and a freaking tear jerker. My soul is crying right now.
I hope life is going well for you, and I hope to see more of your updates (because your other One Piece story is seriously the bomb), but if I don't, I just want to say that you have an excellent imagination, and thank you for sharing your stories with us :)
Chromaticist chapter 6 . 1/10/2013
This story... I have no words for.
misc-13 chapter 6 . 12/10/2012
TTTT
no
can't...
take it...
it's
too
SAD D:
but it was written too well! I haven't read any stories with sad endings for a while so I forgot how sad they are
The emotion written in this story was so perfect !
ARG WHY!
jdiabla chapter 6 . 11/24/2012
I Absolutely love this. I love the ending, I love the story and I love the sadism. O.O LOVE!
Nanashi XIII chapter 5 . 9/2/2012
...Any chance you could send me a link to the full version?
Nanashi XIII chapter 6 . 9/2/2012
If I'd known it ended like this I would not have started it this late. Extremely creepy story you have here. Wonderfully written, amazing plot, but creepy as fuck. Seriously, I keep jumping at the sounds the house is making. -may never sleep again-
21Chances chapter 6 . 2/25/2012
...I HATE YOU!...BUT I LOVE YOU. THIS STOY WAS BAD...BUT GREAT. I AM CRYING. WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA. YOU R A HORRBLEU GREAT WRITER! I AM SOOO CONFLICTED WITH SO MANY EMOTIONS! (CRYS SOME MORE)
Mo0Chroi chapter 6 . 2/15/2012
-stares in shock- *blinks slowly* -stares more in shock-

Okay... that was... that was... unexpected... to say the least... oh my wow. I was hoping for something a bit brighter but oh no - Pyramid Head came outta no where, landed, struck a hero pose and went 'HAHA' at me! XD

This was amazing - to say the least - amazing. I give less of a crap that it was written three or so years ago. It was delightful to read: the emotion was so clear, Sanji's descent into insanity and what he tried to do to save himself, Zoro's frustration at not being able to help, and his love (I'm not sure if that's too strong of a word ; ) for Sanji - everything you could just FEEL. And it was so clear that it felt like watching a movie play out in front of my eyes yet their arguing made me laugh a bit and was the comic relief.

Granted to say - I would LOVE to see a sequel to this (I see that several others share my opinion lol~) and have it play out yet again and weather Zoro saves him this time or weather Sanji dies yet again is really up to you but I'd enjoy seeing our favorite Marimo win this time! XD But I'm unsure if you want to write another or leave it at how it was - either way - up to you.

Overall - this ending reached out and slapped me, being the 1 / 10 stories that I could NOT predict nor see the ending too and it was a delight, DELIGHT, to read being the horror fan that I am! You did amazing! -applauds- :3
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