|Reviews for White Walls Specked With Blood|
| Esteban T. Rodriguez chapter 1 . 3/8/2008
Interesting. Reminds me of the combat simulator. Very well written. Kudos.
| newhenpal chapter 1 . 12/13/2007
wow, I no these words are constantly thrown around in fanfiction reviews, and to tell you the truth most are crap, being told in third person with piss poor dialouge and storyline (with even worse summarys). Especially Perfect Dark, seeing as the originals story wasn't the best with cheesy dialouge. But I must say this was actually a story that I enjoyed, with an original storyline, and perspective. It also doesn't drag on forever, I give it a 9 out of 10, good job, especially since you were bored making this. Oh and where is this supposed to take place? Complex? cause I though the walls were a slight tan.