Reviews for A Beautiful Mess
Kazahana Yukina chapter 1 . 5/13/2014
wow. You did a good job capturing the readers' attention in the first chapter. And the way you present their banter was really entertaining for me. I'll be looking forward to updates!
D3m0nDarks chapter 2 . 7/24/2013
half of me wants to know how it's possible to get as many reviews as you did in just 2 chapters, and the other half wants that half to shut up and just yell at you to update XD
Black Roses shine at night chapter 2 . 6/20/2013
Yes I'm interested!
Update! Update now!

Oh err... I mean... Please...?

Oh who am I kidding?!
Ms-Talks-a-Lot chapter 2 . 5/5/2013
Wow! That was nice! Scratch that- that. Was. Awesome! Please continue. DON'T YOU DARE STOP MAKING THIS STORY UNTIL IT'S FINISHED. And oh yeah, unrequited love is much more painful than having PMS. Anyway keep up the good work! D
steenta112 chapter 1 . 2/18/2013
I hope you update! This is such a good start!
Buhbuhbuhbuhbetsy chapter 2 . 1/6/2013
Please update soon! This is one of the few fanfictions I'm really looking forward to read!
RASHAI DA BOSS chapter 2 . 1/4/2013
This is pretty interesting.. I like that Ten Ten loves Neji but still has to find him a wife.. creates conflict..

On another note, you're really descriptive and i can appreciate that. Its what every writer wants. To transfer the reader to their imagination, make 'em see what you see, make 'em feel how the characters feel
kohziqing chapter 2 . 12/29/2012
I like this story! Keep up the good work!:)
Guest chapter 2 . 12/20/2012
Nice, can't wait to see what happens to Neji and Tenten and if Tenten will be able to withstand trying to find the guy she loves a wife. . Update when you have time please. (I totally understand if that's in approximately two years, but hey, life gets busy!)
Dancing-Souls chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
Oh wow great opportunity, but you have to be with Tenten Neji!
Dancing-Souls chapter 2 . 12/16/2012
Oh I like now let me go back and review chapter one since I am all caught up.
misspandalily chapter 2 . 10/7/2012
Love it. 10/10. Well written, descriptive, you know how to string a sentence together! :D
Please keep updating!
Weeping Blood chapter 2 . 9/18/2012
Omg, I love this story! Please update more. 3
Phenomiracle chapter 2 . 9/18/2012
What the-? Reader interest?

Get outta here! You've got reader interest that would spawn five or six chapters alone! And you're worrying about not getting past two?

Great story, and man, you really tortured Tenten in second half of the chapter. I've never felt as sorry for a side character as I did then. Ever. Keep up the great work and update soon!
missy4eva chapter 2 . 9/16/2012
This was great :D It was hard to not feel sadness reading about Tenten's thoughts on Neji and everything and I'm really excited to see what will come next! Please update :D!
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