cool

I know that this story is complete. Love the idea and plot development but it’s too damn draggy. I have to keep reading other stories just to keep me interested in this story. I’m sorry if I offend you in any manner but it’s too damn draggy. I have been reading for about two months and I have switched to about 20 other stories

"So wait, you got bone powers from an eye transplant?"

This is, without a doubt, the greatest line ever written in fandom

Well, this chapter, and the rest of the story, can only be described as great, with your version of the story making it such a awesome and whole piece of fiction. I really enjoyed this story, as it one of the best Naruto Fanfictions there is.

Until Naruto grows strong and Shows some feats i skip most of the Fic. Fr: It is annoying how easily Zetsu beat him (Zetsu is weak af, there is no way this shit can even scratch him)

wait,why yukihana? why not go with the cannon name of kushina? is this like minato where they dint knew the name yet soo they went with arashi until they discovered the correct one?(kushinas name was revealed AFTER minatos)

So… did naruto lose his wallet, or was it these death blades that naruto lost?

Now that I saw that this fanfic is very old it makes sense that some information is wrong.

Oxe, why change who Naruto's mother was and much less his backstory, if his mother was this Uzumaki, he would have no reason to hide that she was, nor reasons for him not to be taught about his sacrifice and deeds.

Please don’t involve hinata and outbursts in the sentence better yet paragraph they don’t mix

Makes sense you don’t know narutos mother’s name since this fic old

Mxm i hate it when people add unnecessary powers when the original story has already enough of them now what must naruto do with this oooo powerful silver chakra that his using to do feta new pedicures

What was the point of the new appearance
Type O jutsu? Nah your chacing me away no no no this is like walking into a party ur not welcomed to enter…

Fine fine I’m leaving mxm I can see I’m intruding

Absolute trash. But it fits this shit af pairing. Gfkysasap.

really, really, like REALLY ooc this is hinata, it's someone else with her face literally, be for real...

Threw my phone across the room wawow was not prepared for the cringe

ah I forgot about this. this is why I don't read any fanfics that came out before 2010. the background information is always so horribly wrong. I know it's not the authors fault but it annoys me

finally got around to starting this. NGL the '170 chapters' is a bit intimidating.