Reviews for A Growing Affection
Amer Leon chapter 151 . 3/11/2013
i would have to agree with your character dialogue at the end here...the story has gotten dry without one of the major componants that you have in your summary at the top of every page...the naruhina romance has been pretty much gone for the last 50 or so chapters...nothing new or excitingly romantic has taken place. You have all fighting, politics, endless descriptions of past events and flashbacks...but almost no romantic interludes between the characters you started off soooo well with...naruto and hinata...you did have some great naruhina at the start of this story. i will read on.
Amer Leon chapter 148 . 3/11/2013
good moment for naruto and hinata here...they do seem to be close here...there is a flash of that interspersed here and there. i'm looking forward to the big battle coming up between naruto and his uncle.
Amer Leon chapter 145 . 3/11/2013
once again i love the action and just the general story is great...but i would say that the romance is pretty much missing from this section of the story...naruto and hinata have interactions but not what naruto/hinata fans would call naruhina moments. at times it seems like they are more like coworkers or fighting partners who care for each other but are not even starting a hot romantic relationship the way most normal teens would. i do think that in a long story it would be tough to maintain a romantic relationship that stays fresh...excellent story.
Amer Leon chapter 144 . 3/11/2013
gai goes out in a flash of glory...killing kisame...his firtility deposits?...kind of like what we dairy farmers do with 'firtility deposits' of bulls with an outstanding bloodline? so this means that marriage laws have been updated in the leaf village to include partners of the same gender. i don't think that this is canon though:)
Amer Leon chapter 143 . 3/10/2013
naruto arrives to help hinata just as she was in trouble...kohaku had at least a chance to meet and greet naruto. hinata couldn't defeat her but at least held her own for a time. good fight narration again.
Amer Leon chapter 142 . 3/10/2013
superb chap here...it gets back to the characters that i enjoy reading about the most. these are interesting battles and easier to follow, because you kept it a little simpler this time...with just the two characters involved. cool job.
Amer Leon chapter 141 . 3/10/2013
two chapters now and still no resolution to the cliffhanger that hinata was left in fighting a tailed beast that up and disappeared. i do think for sure now that as the story has moved along you have moved on from naruhina. the first part of the story seemed to have a little more excitement because they were the focus...these other cool naruto characters just don't have the same emotional connection for me.
Amer Leon chapter 140 . 3/10/2013
what happened to hinata? wasn't she just about to get zapped by a tailed beast...and we get switched to gai? hinata is the one everyone cares about...oh, well...good fight here:)
Amer Leon chapter 139 . 3/10/2013
quite a fight here between hinata and kohaku...is this taking place while the main battle is happening somewhere else? it looks as if hinata is in trouble.
Amer Leon chapter 135 . 3/10/2013
this is an idea that i have never seen...with the small army of blood clones that naruto produces. great idea...and the way it was done is gross...but cool. it is nice the way you have hinata right there helping him...it does remind me of the manga right now...she is helping him and healing him even...not leaving his side.
Amer Leon chapter 130 . 3/9/2013
it is all made clear now! i was completely fooled by the last few chaps. the reality of the situation was so cool...the mission was a success. very fun chapters.
Amer Leon chapter 129 . 3/9/2013
this was such a turnaround...pretty neat chap! i still don't understand completely...but i will as i read on...a lot of action here and revenge for naruto and hinata on the reaper.
Amer Leon chapter 128 . 3/9/2013
cool battle description here...you have done a great job with this...they withdrew and are on the run. they were just outgunned and the numbers were not in their favor. this is so different but realistic the way fights can swing in a negative way.
Amer Leon chapter 127 . 3/9/2013
this is not going to well here...i just hope that somehow they regroup and things will work out. well-written, but i can see that things are slowly going south for the team inside the house and outside also. hinata seems ineffective in this fight...well all of them do.
Amer Leon chapter 126 . 3/9/2013
another super battle scene switching from character to character...very easy to follow and fun to visualize. looks like hinata has spotted trouble on the way.
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