Reviews for The Next One Chosen
Guest chapter 2 . 5/16/2017
whoa. how unexpected and i am so looking forward to the rest of the story!
Guest chapter 7 . 9/22/2016
Maybe i have got an idea:
The child should be weak. Maybe like Neville.
Maybe have no magic at all, or just very little.
Maybe other weaknesses.
He could be kind of like David.
He could be good at music, too.
No need to go to foreign countries.
Guest chapter 4 . 9/22/2016
would be "children"
2."act as husband/wife" means uhm, things.
(See me criticising your story? This means i like it ö.ö m.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/22/2016
You are writing great stories, so let me critizise you on spelling for once:
"to know, knew, known", verb, means "to understand".
"now" means "in this current time".
Thank you for writing stories with ideas i could not imagine :-)m.
normaj chapter 7 . 6/25/2016
Awesome story, hopefully you finish one day. Awaiting your triumphant return!
AnaBookWorm chapter 7 . 12/10/2015
I really like this! Please continue!
Guest chapter 7 . 6/3/2015
Hey. I know its been years but this is a really great story. Please continue it
AnimagiPotter chapter 7 . 8/26/2013
0ddsocks chapter 7 . 7/6/2013
hey!1 old buddy, old pal! no? guess not... however, you need to continue this totes awesome story! I am dying to read what happens next!
Very Small Prophet chapter 2 . 5/20/2012
"I am a Gryfindor," she said to him as if to challenge him, "loyalty is what we do best."

Wrong. Loyalty is what Hufflepuffs do best. Courage is what Gryffindors do best.

That doesn't mean Gryffies (or Slytherins or Ravenclaws) can't be loyal, but loyalty is not a defining characteristic of their House. It's something that may be there, or may not be, depending on the individual. Hermione has it, but she can't attribute it to being a Gryffindor.
JeniDRalph chapter 3 . 2/22/2012
He did a good job outwitting the Dark Lord.
JeniDRalph chapter 2 . 2/22/2012
I see that this hasn't been completed or updated in a while. Oh well, I guess I'm setting myself up for frustration.
JeniDRalph chapter 1 . 2/22/2012
This sounds promising...
Los Grotos chapter 2 . 6/30/2011
Hufflepuff's are know for their loyalty. Griffindors are known for their tenacity, and bravery.
jada951 chapter 7 . 9/23/2010
oh bummer! what an interesting concept.

you have some unique ideas. I just wish you had finished this story too!

If you do ever get back to it, I know your readers would be grateful.

Thanks for the enjoyable reading the past couple days!

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