really awesome story so far cant wait for the next chapter

I have to say, this is one of the best fanfics ive read in awhile o.o I really like your portrayal of Sabin, and Edgar too. It's quite an interesting story, can't wait for more.

aw. Poor Sabin. Nice transitions, by the way. I often wonder what relevance had Locke have to do with the plot. I bet it's something deep. _.. keep up the good work.

Damn! This is getting heavy!

You have lots of mistakes with grammar all over the place, but nothing too serious that it interferes with the story. Besides that, the story is very smooth, with lots of interesting details. Nice! I love the beginning; it draws in the reader, and keeps them wondering. I also like the element of mystery, like at the end of the chapter. Story has been faved!

It's great to read a fic about Sabine, as hardly anyone rights from his point of view. I like your writing style too, its very upfront and realistic. Can't wait to read the rest of this!

I really liked the way Sabin was teaching his students. Six by ten circuit had a nice touch to it, especially when all the students groaned after hearing it. Reminds me of the time I was practicing martial arts under a teacher.

I'm really looking forward to the next chapters. It would be nice if there was going to be some cameos or extra mention of the rest of the FFVI cast as well, like when Locke sent that golden statue to Sabin in chapter 1.

Anyway, keep up the good work.

Wow, I'm personally shocked. Considering how Sabin talks about Terra in this, I didn't think that he'd be interested in her romantically. Nice job keeping that a little secret ;:)

There are so amny dimensions to this story, I can't wait to see how everything turns out in the end.

Well...I don't really have anything else to say other than: please update as soon as you can! I'm really curious about what will happen next.

Regarding what I said in my last review, about Sabin being distant, I guess you probably did what on purpose.

I like the similes here. Man, Edgar is quite predicable when it comes to women. I'm curious as to what happened with Terra. And I have to say I'm a bit like Terra when it comes to swearing...

Whoaa...I didn't see that coming. Sabin's foot turning into stone I mean. I hope he'll fix it back somehow.

Before they reunited I had the impression that Sabin doesn't like Terra much, or Edgar either. In fact Sabin seems quite...distant from everyone, possibly apart from his students. Maybe it's the way the narration is written; the mood is...cold and has little emotion in it.

But aside from that the story itself is engaging. And it's very easy to visualize the scenes with the detailed descriptions provided. Love that part when Sabin asked Edgar for a blowtorch

Wow...I have to say the introduction is very intense. Sabin didn't really get to show much personality in the game so it's nice to see an insight into his mind. It's really good so far!

This is pretty heavy. Final Fantasy VI really lacked character emphasis and development. I think you really done a swell job with this one, especially Sabin's emotional side. It's kind of weird to suddenly see the soft and tender side of Sabin, he was kind of stereotypical back in Final Fantasy VI.

Anyway, I was planning on writing a fanfic for Setzer Gabbiani after the FFVI ordeal, and you're style of kinda inspired me.

I'd really want to know how it ends and what happens to Sabin's petrified foot. Please update it if you have time. _

I figured Sabin and Layla were somewhat of an item; they acted too lovy-dovy to not be or eventually become an item.

Nothing else to really say, accept update soon.

Man, your an excellent writer; when you were describing how Sabin was pulling that ice man, describing how his muscles were working, I really felt his strain. My stomach turned hearing how much he had to push himself to do that.

Poor Sabin, how will he fight with one stone foot? Hopefully it isn't perminanent. Edgar is still a jerk through and through, though I feel a guilty pleasure reading this sort of characterization of him; I think he would probably be like that to some degree.

Great chapter, update soon