|Reviews for Goodbye|
| Vitaliciouscreations chapter 1 . 7/8/2014
OH MY GOODNESS OH MY GOODNESS! I'm totally freaking out. This was so cute! You just nearly killed me with adorableness! I'm dying! This is adorable!
| FireChildSlytherin5 chapter 1 . 3/3/2008
I will agree Beta. :) Love the one-shot.
I think its cute that the Hippo and the Boulder being "freinds" with Toph.
| Kaira-chan15 chapter 1 . 12/2/2007
Aww that was cute and original. Good job! :D
| Honors chapter 1 . 11/28/2007
for you to have writen this in history class its pretty good. hope you can start another story thats even better than this. keep up the good work and good luck.
| WhiteFlame-XIII chapter 1 . 11/28/2007
I alrady watched Black sun, so will you do a favor and review my Black sun story?
This is an okay story so far, but where are you going with this? It's just a setting introduction so far.
The grammar is fairly steady. You have the character vocal patterns down well, too.