|Reviews for Angels Fall First|
| just a girl chapter 9 . 3/17
i'm actually crying! love this so much hal way through
| anon chapter 17 . 1/20
Dammit or damn it is how it's spelled, not damn't...Geeze.
| anon chapter 8 . 1/20
It's HANGER, not hangar.
| anon chapter 3 . 1/20
She's going to tell Harry this when he can't do Occlumency and his mind is wide open to Voldemort? Right.
| carryon chapter 18 . 1/10
lovely. Thank you!
| Greek myths geek chapter 18 . 12/26/2016
Loved this all the way through! Gripping and powerful! Nicely done!
| brittanymcavoy chapter 18 . 12/5/2016
I wish there was more and into further, dirtier details in that last scene! It made me all hot and bothered and I am far from satisfied!
| brittanymcavoy chapter 7 . 12/5/2016
OH MY GOD, THAT WAS FABULOUS! I was literally squealing throughout the whole chapter and my mom walked into my room and asked me what was going on. I just told her I was reading Harry Potter again as that makes me squeal in some parts as well but certainly not this much. She gave me a suspicious look, said hmm, and left. Can't wait to get further along and delve into more Severus and Hermione action!
| Guest chapter 12 . 10/20/2016
what the fuck, how the death eaters got into hogwarts so easily and with Dumbledore there?
For the brightest witch of her age she can be really Thick
| FandomFasination chapter 18 . 8/14/2016
yes! i was so happy when i found (and read) this sory. i had a very simalar story idea (and i mean almost exact) of something just like this with an original character, but because i cant write (definitly not a writer) i searched all over for a simalar story and came up short. months later, i find this brillant peice and im so happy. you did a wonderfull job keeping everyone in character. the story was good. loved the whole bad guy turns good thing which is one of my favorit things (lucius) and it had a happy ending. thankyou so much! i hope to find others that are like this, (though i dont think i will). or at least not as good or precise as yours. so, Thank you! :D
| riskeybusiness chapter 18 . 6/26/2016
Wow that was a great story. Really loved the idea of an eluvia and it was written so well. Thanks for sharing :)
| Autumn900 chapter 18 . 11/21/2015
so different! amazing!
| Guest chapter 18 . 10/23/2015
| Dawn chapter 18 . 10/16/2015
This was a cute story
| mitch404 chapter 18 . 9/18/2015