Reviews for Under the Setting Sun
Heather B chapter 12 . 8/6
And five years on yet another promising story left up in the air. What a shame.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/2
The whole story makes no sense. She wasnt a knight. She wouldnt of been deemed proper either.
stars90 chapter 12 . 9/19/2016
This is terrific work! I love the Anakin you're building here, and his relationship with Siri. Please keep it going!
Frozen862 chapter 12 . 1/27/2016
Shame that you do not update anymore.
Guest chapter 12 . 9/18/2015
Great story! I am sad to see that it has been abandoned. I see your writing other stories so maybe there is hope.
AEStarWars chapter 12 . 8/21/2015
I really want a new chapter! This story is excellent and I actually love fanfictions where Obi-Wan isn't what he is in the movies. I want to know what happens next in this story, thanks
David-El chapter 12 . 7/29/2015
Well, I must say that this is probably the most unique prequel trilogy story that I have ever read, and I can't WAIT to see how this goes, especially Dooku's investigation and the Clone Wars! Speaking of which, will you be adding in events from the Clone Wars series?
Klaw117 chapter 1 . 3/26/2015
So...are you still updating this or have you moved on to other projects? I'm hoping you still have plans for this since it's very rare to find a well-written story that includes Siri in it as well. I'd like to see her and Obi-Wan have a good future together. I'm also very curious to see how Anakin ultimately turns out under her care.
Kennayil chapter 12 . 3/22/2015
As much as I love redemption fics, I think the 'Anakin was not taught by ObiWan' genre comes in a close second. You have done an awesome job on this, but from the date of the last update, it seems you have set it aside. I hope you return to it someday.
Guest chapter 12 . 12/21/2014
pleace next chapter
Dault3883 Barron Backslash chapter 12 . 10/26/2014
please/ start/ this/ story/ again
jaelin910 chapter 1 . 6/11/2014
fun fact; maul actually survived that anyway. he sort-of out-lived even anakin, being finally finished off a few years after the empire ended.
as a side note, having read through some of the reviews people have left, I don't actually plan to read this
jedi-josh chapter 12 . 10/14/2013
ack! please up!
Anon chapter 1 . 9/24/2013
Could not resist reviewing. I found this fanfiction highly irritating. I understand the concept of emotionally unstable Obi Wan but you are forgetting that Obi Wan was a disciplined by the code Padawan. And in the canon verse. Siri Taichi is a hot headed woman, The very way you are portraying Obi Wan. I am sorry. But this story just pissed me off.
Klaw117 chapter 12 . 12/31/2012
Hello, you may remember me from all the reviews I left on your Never Gone stories. I still read that series again from time to time and while I was looking for it last night, I found this story. You'll be pleased to know that this story kept me hooked into the early hours of the morning before I finally went to sleep. I really like this alternative future you've created and the personalities you created for Siri and Anakin. Anakin seems to be closer to the great man that everyone wanted to see after the original trilogy and Siri's tolerance is a welcome addition to the Star Wars universe. It also kind of sucked that Siri didn't marry Obi-Wan in Never Gone. Obi-Wan's new personality is certainly...interesting though. I can see why you did it and I have no objection to it, but it's still kind of sad to see my favorite character fall so far from grace. I was also initially bummed out when I noticed that the last time you updated this was in April, but I noticed on your profile that you mentioned you would be updating this story more regularly in 2013. Therefore, I'll be looking forward to additional chapters for this story. You've written a great story that I vastly prefer over the canon story written by George Lucas.

Just as a heads up, I won't be reviewing every chapter like I did in Never Gone since the reviews end up sounding like generic "Great job, please update soon" reviews (you might have noticed this yourself with all the Never Gone reviews I made when I was younger and less mature). I'd rather leave longer reviews with more substance to them at the more intense points of the story.
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