Reviews for The Sniper
SFC CopperHead chapter 1 . 9/20/2015
Very good story. However, the AWM .338 effective firing range is 1500 meters, the .300's effective range is 1100 meters. A sniper rifle's effective range is judged based upon the range at which one shot, carefully fired by an expert marksman, is guaranteed to strike the target. Sniper weapons tend not to list point or area effective ranges, as sniper rifle effectiveness is not calculated with 50/50 hit ratios. If this were my mission I would have went for a chest shot from a distance of 750 yards since the trunk is a much larger target than the head. The 19.44 g (300 gr) Sierra HPBT MatchKingtravels at 826 m/s giving Tommy boy less than a second to move his head. However, he wouldn't have to move far for Harry to miss which is why I prefer the body shot.

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00 Non C. Anon 00 chapter 1 . 9/6/2015
It always warms my heart to see a "Muggles do it better" story. Niche job.
keelanmurray chapter 1 . 8/28/2015
Amazing
SortingHat chapter 1 . 8/15/2015
Kinda of a bit short and the wall of text doesn't help any. At least dividing this into two or maybe three smaller chapters would not only give the illusion of the story being longer but also be easier on the eyes.
delia cerrano chapter 1 . 8/3/2015
Good job! I would have liked a daphne pairing. I think she could have gotten tired of or escaped from the Voldemore terrors and run into Harry or something. Glad he was cool to Albus. What a fantastic twist having shot Draco was!
Mari Wollsch chapter 1 . 7/30/2015
great xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
AbaddontheDevourer chapter 1 . 7/23/2015
Pretty good
misherukuro chapter 1 . 7/13/2015
Such good read. ~,~
Iceheart15 chapter 1 . 7/4/2015
A very clever what if? scenario.
Tom chapter 1 . 5/21/2015
Not to be an insufferable know it all, but all militaries were banned from using expanding bullets due to the Hague Convention.
ArmoredSky chapter 1 . 5/15/2015
The was a very good and thought out one shot imo. I applaud for you for your ingenuity.
Gracfully chapter 1 . 5/14/2015
like it I do
thonez chapter 1 . 4/24/2015
nice
chaoticblade chapter 1 . 4/2/2015
Nice to see how you merged the wizard and the muggle well but it is such a shame that you didnt continue however it is still one of the best one shot i ever read
Lady Celairiel chapter 1 . 3/23/2015
Cool story!
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