Reviews for The Sniper
Eriktheviking70 chapter 1 . 7/14/2021
Still, a great read, thank you.
Celticowl chapter 1 . 7/2/2021
mkeeg91 chapter 1 . 6/30/2021
Excellent one shot!
I like military Harry
Rune Tobor chapter 1 . 6/16/2021
Not enough DEATH!

DumbleDark is Alive to mess with others lives.
The Malfoys and all other death eater AND ANY OF THEIR CHILDREN Need to Die.


Death eaters showed no mercy so they get None.

Otherwise ok.
Try rewriting with the British Army taking over.
M-chanchen chapter 1 . 6/10/2021
Interesting idea! I really enjoyed reading this. You did great at writing.
Harry seems quite nonchalant about some things, but I guess with his history, that's not unlikely.
I don't think Harry will be contend as an ambassador between muggle and wizarding Britain. He isn't into political plays and I think the easily swayed opinion of the wizarding world isn't something a down-to-earth Harry with military background will like.
waterudoing chapter 1 . 6/3/2021
hi, i know youre probably not gonna edit this anymore but the AWM uses magazines, not clips
JustAnotherCrossoverFan chapter 1 . 5/30/2021
I would like to point out that DIs are in the marines, at least for the American military. In the American Army, we use Drill Sergeants... more psychological abuse than physical, since DSs don't have the freedom of a DI.
DK7TOXINWOLF chapter 1 . 5/10/2021
omg that was amasing!
Aqua Lilly chapter 1 . 4/11/2021
Beautiful, just beautiful.
erik chapter 1 . 3/22/2021
Still a great read.
HoneyBear84 chapter 1 . 3/21/2021
Love it
Publius R chapter 1 . 3/15/2021
Great story!
deiskos chapter 1 . 2/27/2021
Good read
4fundaore chapter 1 . 2/6/2021
stevem1 chapter 1 . 1/23/2021
This is a well written, entertaining short story. Recommended.
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