Reviews for The Sniper |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed your story particularly the first person perspective. I liked Harry’s cynicism and his approach to the world. Thank you for sharing your story |
![]() ![]() Brilliant. Ruddy brilliant! |
![]() ![]() ![]() love this so much, wish there was more but it's perfect as it is, love what you did with Malfoy, realistic but he still got his dues |
![]() ![]() great read |
![]() ![]() ![]() I do not like 1st person stories, in my opponent 3rd person stories are much better but overall I give this a 7/10. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great short story. Well written, barely any typos. Really enjoyed the different take on life for Harry. Didn't need the OP-wandless stuff in my opinion, but I guess it helps to get Harry not going crazy. Thanks for writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() There's only one thing wrong with Harry's description of basic training. After living with the Dursleys, it should have been easy. I'm speaking from experience here. Basic training was, for me, quite honestly a piece of cake. I breezed right through it. The DI had nothing on my mother; my mother was...well, think Molly Weasley on steroids. ;D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great fic, really enjoyed the read |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was very good. Thanks for posting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() AMAZING STORY! THANK YOU FOR YOUR HARD WORK! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this story. I have read it many times and I noticed that where Snape is at the end of the war is never mentioned. Did he die? Did Harry kill him when he joined Malfoy in the attack on Mcgonagall's home? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Still, a great read, thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent one shot! I like military Harry |
![]() ![]() Not enough DEATH! DumbleDark is Alive to mess with others lives. The Malfoys and all other death eater AND ANY OF THEIR CHILDREN Need to Die. Mercy?! Death eaters showed no mercy so they get None. Otherwise ok. Try rewriting with the British Army taking over. |