Reviews for The Sniper
hdres chapter 1 . 1/31/2022
I really enjoyed your story particularly the first person perspective. I liked Harry’s cynicism and his approach to the world. Thank you for sharing your story
Guest chapter 1 . 1/11/2022
Brilliant. Ruddy brilliant!
ManticoreBlues chapter 1 . 12/12/2021
love this so much, wish there was more but it's perfect as it is, love what you did with Malfoy, realistic but he still got his dues
lunaz chapter 1 . 12/4/2021
great read
Lord Harry Potter-Black chapter 1 . 12/5/2021
I do not like 1st person stories, in my opponent 3rd person stories are much better but overall I give this a 7/10.
Sparkling Ratemis chapter 1 . 11/29/2021
Great short story. Well written, barely any typos. Really enjoyed the different take on life for Harry. Didn't need the OP-wandless stuff in my opinion, but I guess it helps to get Harry not going crazy. Thanks for writing!
Jake Crepeau chapter 1 . 11/28/2021
There's only one thing wrong with Harry's description of basic training. After living with the Dursleys, it should have been easy. I'm speaking from experience here. Basic training was, for me, quite honestly a piece of cake. I breezed right through it. The DI had nothing on my mother; my mother was...well, think Molly Weasley on steroids. ;D
Sandaime Hokage chapter 1 . 11/26/2021
Great fic, really enjoyed the read
FriendlyFire59 chapter 1 . 10/13/2021
That was very good.
Thanks for posting.
Kittens Kat chapter 1 . 10/9/2021
AMAZING STORY! THANK YOU FOR YOUR HARD WORK!
Inu-bitch chapter 1 . 9/7/2021
Love this story. I have read it many times and I noticed that where Snape is at the end of the war is never mentioned. Did he die? Did Harry kill him when he joined Malfoy in the attack on Mcgonagall's home?
Eriktheviking70 chapter 1 . 7/14/2021
Still, a great read, thank you.
Celticowl chapter 1 . 7/2/2021
awesome
mkeeg91 chapter 1 . 6/30/2021
Excellent one shot!
I like military Harry
Rune Tobor chapter 1 . 6/16/2021
Not enough DEATH!

DumbleDark is Alive to mess with others lives.
The Malfoys and all other death eater AND ANY OF THEIR CHILDREN Need to Die.

Mercy?!

Death eaters showed no mercy so they get None.

Otherwise ok.
Try rewriting with the British Army taking over.
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