Reviews for The Sniper
Winoniel chapter 1 . 9/18/2008
Looks like I'm going through your stories tonight! I like your mature, let's-just-move-on Harry! If you write more of these, could we see more interaction between him and the Slytherins (mainly Snape and Draco)?

Very well done!
Jimbocous chapter 1 . 9/18/2008
Nicely done!
everpresent chapter 1 . 9/18/2008
a sequel would be nice. I'm not sure where it would _go_ but it would be nice.

At the very least, a nice cup of tea with Minerva would be a good way to "discuss" little Draco's story.

And the vengeance-seeking side of me really would like to have seen something with Snape. But I dunno if it would really have worked with the "dismissive" way you treated Dumbledore at the story's end.

thanks for sharing
Daled73 chapter 1 . 9/16/2008
The US military units would say "If you're not cheating, you're not trying!" so taking them out with weapons they refuse to even cosider is the perfect combination of insult and injury.

Also, in war there are no rules except win, and fighting the enemy should be a case of "Clubbing baby seals" if possible.

Or as attributed to General Patton, probably wrongly..."We don't want you to die for your country. Your job is to make the other poor, dumb, sone of a b*h die for HIS country."

The sniper role, however, is a perfect choice as it avoids the impracticalities of swatting a fly with a tactical nuclear weapon, although I'm sure the British military would have gladly used a pony nuke on Voldemort if they had known where to find him. Or at least a brace of cluster munitions.
SerinSykes chapter 1 . 9/15/2008
all i can say about this Story is Awesome Sauce!
titpuce86 chapter 1 . 9/15/2008
Just so you know how much i liked your story. It's really welle written and i simply love the ngratulations on that one!
Inumaru12 chapter 1 . 9/12/2008
very awesome.
Weirkat chapter 1 . 9/10/2008
I'm so happy to have come across this story. It was really well thought out, and the plot flowed smoothly.

Really well written, and I enjoyed the reading of it.

Thank you for having shared it.
old-crow chapter 1 . 9/10/2008
Outstanding work, Corporal!

You had an interesting choice for a rifle.

Well done.

O-C
NLaddict chapter 1 . 9/7/2008
that was great!
hi chapter 1 . 9/5/2008
wow love it!
NaiveGhost chapter 1 . 9/4/2008
This was very good!

;-)
EvilDime chapter 1 . 8/31/2008
*g* That was fun, in a slightly deranged way. :P

I've read soldier!Harry fics before, but the way you told this was certainly original. So you've got my vote for that Quibbler category.

- Dime
ZeroTheDestroyer chapter 1 . 8/30/2008
its good, but giving and Hermoine a happy ending and Ginny not dead ruins the effect somewhat, but i guess thats just my opinion.

Great Oneshot lol, the sniper was good.
Lord Sia chapter 1 . 8/29/2008
Cool fic, love the idea. Although I would probably go for a lot more bashing; Dursleys, Ol goatf*cker, Ron "I'm-so-jealous" and Hermione "I-know-it-all", along with the rest. Ah well, good stuff, my commendations.
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