Reviews for The Sniper
Sarah chapter 1 . 5/5/2008
I would just like to say that this story is the best story I have read on here. Most stories that involve something from outside the wizarding world manage to completely butcher one or the other. Reading this, it's obvious that you've done your research. You managed to combine the muggle and wizarding world brilliantly, and it seems as though it is something that could happen were the wizarding world to exist. Wonderfully written! This story flows.
sandstar08 chapter 1 . 5/4/2008
very interesting spin... this has the taste of a long novel, but in reality is 3-4 chapters together in length...
Amber Akasha chapter 1 . 5/4/2008
absolutely brilliant.

it had me laughting, holding my breath and cheering. all at the same time.
Perspicacity chapter 1 . 5/1/2008
I enjoyed this piece very much. I think first person narrative worked well in this story and you carried it off brilliantly, a good balance of snarky and serious. Also, the piece was just the right length and I liked how you didn't need to go into the details of the killing of Voldemort; the implied killing was more potent.

-Brian
Toebang chapter 1 . 5/1/2008
entertaining read, thanks for writting.
Uncle Schrodinger chapter 1 . 4/26/2008
sweetness on an inhuman level.

you rock in this world and every other.
Xyverz chapter 1 . 4/23/2008
This was a FANTASTIC story. I'd love to see more in this world you've created, but that might not do this one-shot any justice.

Thank you for keeping me entertained! :-)
OccAmy Phyre chapter 1 . 4/22/2008
This story was wonderful! I've always wanted Voldemort to be taken out by a sniper. It's the epitome of poetic justice. I love it! Especially the last part with Draco.
Anon chapter 1 . 4/22/2008
I really enjoyed this story. Harry is a good candidate for military life- the regulation and discipline would be helpful and the clear feedback would really build his confidence. I also like the use of muggle technology. Why didn't any of those magical geniuses ever consider a simple gun? The wizarding world really underestimates the muggle world, and it's nice to see it brought home to them.

Lastly, I'm a Cedric fan, so loved seeing his name here. Please keep writing!
PsychoWing chapter 1 . 4/6/2008
I haven't found many 'Harry in the muggle military stories'. This one is good. I'm very pleased with the way you did it. If you decide to write a story going more in depth with his training and any friends he makes in the military (be it from this story or a new one entirely), please let me know.
PaperPandas chapter 1 . 3/30/2008
Glad i found this story.

Absolutely loved it, just like all of your other work, well written unique and thought out.

Keep up the amazing work
cckeimig chapter 1 . 3/26/2008
Awesome! Sorry I took so long to get to it!
kirallie chapter 1 . 3/25/2008
Good work! Would have liked to see harry's decision on what to do now career wise. How did theyt know he was the sniper?
Jarvey chapter 1 . 3/25/2008
Excellent one-shot. Very well done.
hA-UkA chapter 1 . 3/25/2008
Love the omake.
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