Reviews for The Sniper |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Superb story! Very unique, but quite plausible. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story. You incorporated the military well into this fanfiction. The bit with Malfoy at the end was priceless! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was awsome. You really should write a follow up to this story, preferably one about Harry's time in the SAS. Personally, I belive that Harry should get some sort of medal for stopping one of the most feared terrorists in recent times. |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome work |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE this story. Well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice fic i liked how you went into detail about Harry's time in the military, made it personal while at the same time not making it too cliche or sumin p. and the epilogue was funneh P |
![]() ![]() I really love your twist on OoTP here! I personally find that this is unique and I would dearly love to see a more in-depth, novel-length chapter on this premise! :) But, I love it as well as a one shot so anything would be great for me. (But i'd still love more installments of this! *HInt*) Would you mind terribly if I rec this and Altered Destinies on my LJ? - Thanks for writing this. You made my day a whole lot better |
![]() ![]() i just thought i'd point out even though you've probably been told, in the chapter when harry goes to meet kingsley after the deed is done one of the military personel called him potter insted of diggory, and harry hadn't been outed yet. also if you haven't read it i'd like to recommend the bok killing fields, it's a novel written by an ex marine sniper, about a fictional sniper. you might like it |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was interesting and all cause your a great writer but what I want to read is the sequel to Altered Destinies. Please write it soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it :) It'd be cool if you made this into a series of one shots... like make another chapter 10 years later where he has to fight in a muggle war or something like that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well that was fun. Good story, I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for writing. W. |
![]() ![]() Very enjoyable. I'm not too sure about the way you handled the connections between the different sections, although the sections themselves were enjoyable. Please continue this, although having Harry progress as a member of the Army, with occassional forays into the Wizarding world, would be more original. Thanks Lee |
![]() ![]() ![]() A great one-shot I love it:) Keep up the great work and update as soon as you possibly can:) May you be blessed with inspiration and have fun writing:) Bye for now:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow! great story. You managed to fit alot into a short sace. good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice, |