Really cool story there, good job!

Brilliant. *chuckles* I love this story to itty bitty bits. Sounds like something Ed Becerra would write, without the romance. Totally a compliment. I love these military themed fics.

Thanks for writing,

Kin.

That was absolutely brilliant, I wish there was some way the story could go on from there.

That Was Great! It's gripping, intense, and logical, and I love a smart, savvy Harry. Thank You for a hero that's heroic. I got SO tired of banzai!Harry...

This is a really nice story! keep up with the good work!

i loved your portrayal of harry! it was brilliant ass usaul and i was amused to not that considering where harry's scar is, voldemort really is a pain in the ass lol

"'Hey Potter'...Irony hates me"

I must have laughed for ten minutes at this.

Exciting. the end was good. This would be interesting to see from a magical pov as well.

Great story! I love how Harry used the military to take control of his life. (In a relative sense.)

That was awesome.

Brilliant! I loved your story! I usually don't like first person tales but you did it wonderfully! I really enjoyed this one. I hope to see more of you and your brilliant imagination and starling writing skills. You definitivily made my boring day a little brighter.

Very well done.

BUT...

What happened to Snape?

Interesting. I think that this is awesome. I like that he went out and made a name for his-self. I would have loved to know what happened to Snape. Great one shot. I read chaptered fics that are not this good.

That was wonderful. I hope you decide to write more stories. I love your ability to make unique and filling ones. You're a very impressive writer. You are also very good at keeping the personalities of the characters accurate. Fantastic job!

Fabulous story, too bad it was only a one-shot.