| Reviews for The Sniper |
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   DragonOverlord chapter 1 . 11/28/2007 Great story, mate! |
| BDSanta2001 chapter 1 . 11/28/2007 Wicked cool |
| Wings Of Fancy chapter 1 . 11/28/2007 This was really funny. I liked it alot! |
| Golden23 chapter 1 . 11/28/2007 I really liked this! Too many times writers have Harry as someone that suddenly matures and 'oh I'll go kill Voldie right now!' This way at least he actually 'grew' up and matured instead of just BAM and you're done. Anyway great story! -Goldie |
| RagingCacti chapter 1 . 11/28/2007 I absolutly love it. This is great work. There is nothing more I can say. Vampie |
| Priya Ashok chapter 1 . 11/28/2007 Great stuff! |
| spacecatdet chapter 1 . 11/28/2007 I liked it. Is there going to be another story along these lines? I hope so. |
| LunaSky chapter 1 . 11/28/2007 LOVED IT! :D:D:D:D now... Altered Destinies 2? SOON? thnx :D -LunaSky |
| bookaholic-au chapter 1 . 11/28/2007 Excellent story. I appreciated your research, I know nothing about any military, let alone the British, but it still shows and makes the story all the richer. The Omake is precious, very dry and pointed humour, used to great effect. Keep writing |
| Ensiferous chapter 1 . 11/28/2007 I'm not sure how you do it, yet another story that have me wishing for more. I only managed to find a few grammatical errors which is impressive for a 12,370 words chapter. The flow of the story is great, at times it seems a little too narrative in a "and then... and then... and then..." form, but that was minor really. Your 'Potter' nickname had me literally laughing out loud while it didn't make the story any less serious. All in all it's another great addition to your portfolio, and it's bloody nice to know you're still alive; keeps my hope for a sequel to Altered Destinies alive. Can't wait for more. |