Reviews for The Sniper
bookaholic-au chapter 1 . 11/28/2007
Excellent story. I appreciated your research, I know nothing about any military, let alone the British, but it still shows and makes the story all the richer. The Omake is precious, very dry and pointed humour, used to great effect. Keep writing
Ensiferous chapter 1 . 11/28/2007
I'm not sure how you do it, yet another story that have me wishing for more. I only managed to find a few grammatical errors which is impressive for a 12,370 words chapter.

The flow of the story is great, at times it seems a little too narrative in a "and then... and then... and then..." form, but that was minor really.

Your 'Potter' nickname had me literally laughing out loud while it didn't make the story any less serious.

All in all it's another great addition to your portfolio, and it's bloody nice to know you're still alive; keeps my hope for a sequel to Altered Destinies alive. Can't wait for more.
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