|Reviews for Snowbird Chained|
| MosinM38 chapter 2 . 12/17/2007
First off I will say I have been a "Lurker" for about 4 months. Just never registered to review. Your work is great. I first will say that all your previous work is easily worthy of the review for this one.
Now...for this chapters review.
It is great. The "Dual viewpoints" of both the Clan and Snowbirds is fun to read. Sometimes it is tried and comes out badly but you have done it well.
The mis-understanding of the clans intentions by the InnerSphere is captured well, by the confusion of Everson.
Good chapter all-around!
| RougeBaron chapter 1 . 12/9/2007
I must say that you are the most prolific writer in this forum. Your "work" ethic is amazing and sometimes keeping up is a challenge. Hopefully it pays off in some way. Maybe Wizkids will put this story arc as canon or apocryphal. I'm glad if they do.
After much politics and character developments, action is very well expected to balance the story. The battle is intense, and I am eager to see more.