|Reviews for Rosalie's Revenge|
| Angelic Messenger17 chapter 2 . 12/7/2007
...and rosalie IS one for plans...
they'll never know what hits them...until only one is left...
and they still wont know exactly what hit them...lol...
| helpsmethroughtheday chapter 2 . 12/7/2007
oh my GOD i love this story so much! you're a fantastic writer and i cant wait for more!
| EmmiLuvsEdwardCullen chapter 2 . 12/7/2007
Very good, keep it up ;)
| Bribbie chapter 2 . 12/7/2007
Awe Edward hasn't had enough time to truley care for Rose yet, but he cares for her on some level... Geeze Rose HAD brothers you'd think she'd recognise the way they worked.
I still wonder about her relationship with Carlise and Esme. Like i said before, She and Esme have a common thread, the mother thing, but I'm not sure whether or not she blames Carlisle. I can't think of ANYONE ever disliking carlisle for any reason, he's such a nice guy, copassionate (obviously) and gentel and Like When Rose was telling Bella about her change, about the things Carlisle said, that tortured Savior thing he had, it's actually really cute. I couldn't imagine a sweeter father figure. So yeah... if you can... get to that, even if only breifly
So how long do you suppose they stayed in Rochester after Rose's "death"? like she has to have her revenge obviously, so she needs time to plan, to steal the wedding dress, to actually go and kill 7 people. Lot's to do. But I imagine they left shortly after she was done with that... problem with revenge is, it doesn't bring closure, it doesn't make it better, so I assume the story will go on long enough for her to realize this, and long enough for her to ACTUALLY heal, killing them may be what she wants now, but when it's all said and done, she'll prolly have one of those "what now?" moments... Emmett probably helped her heal, as much as was possible. As we know she still curses her fate. Hm... I wonder though...
So she didn't drink any of their blood, I'm sure that was a struggle, to be killing them and abstain from feeding. That'll be difficult, well thre's lots to do... lots to do...
I like this. I know i'd have trouble with Rose's pov, according to Edward she very often just thought about herself, her looks and what not, and about Emmett, but i know that she can't ONLY think about that... She'd be difficult to me, so i applaud you!
Well anyway, update soon!
| Dont.Open.That.Door chapter 2 . 12/7/2007
i like this, i think its a really good idea
| SisterGrimmErin chapter 2 . 12/7/2007
very good... keep going, the suspense is killing me!
| Angelsca20 chapter 2 . 12/7/2007
Can't wait for these assholes to be killed. Go, Rosalie!
| Emilie Cullen XO chapter 2 . 12/7/2007
Please continue your story is very good. I can't wait to read what happens next!
| eclipselover chapter 2 . 12/7/2007
shes going through alot of trouble
| SisterGrimmErin chapter 1 . 12/3/2007
wow! this is really good. i've never seen this before... so continue!
| helpsmethroughtheday chapter 1 . 12/2/2007
that was so good! i cant to read more!
| sounds of music chapter 1 . 11/30/2007
This story sounds like it could be quite interesting. It's an angle that I've seen seen done before, and I'm excited to see where it goes. Please post again when you get the chance!
| EmmiLuvsEdwardCullen chapter 1 . 11/30/2007
Oh my, poor Rosalie ;( This story idea is very unique and original, and I really like your writing. I'm going to put this on alert )
| Angelsca20 chapter 1 . 11/30/2007
I'm keeping my eyes on this. This is worth reading. Can't wait for Rosalie's revenge.
| koerle chapter 1 . 11/30/2007
This story really seems to capture Rosalie very good. Everybody moving on so soon... that is pretty harsh.