|Reviews for Unexpected Contact|
| Moosey chapter 1 . 12/6/2007
I rather enjoyed this story, but I was going to comment on precisely what the other person said - Why did the butterfly die after touching him? Other than that, I liked it, though :)
| melskylark chapter 1 . 11/29/2007
Maybe I'm confused by the wording of your story, but it appears you're saying because the butterfly landed on his skin it died. But Ned's gift doesn't work like that. If a living butterfly landed on his bare skin, it would be okay. The thing has to be dead already for his gift to do anything. So, say the butterfly slammed into a pane of glass, died from the impact, and then fell on Ned's skin, it would come back to life until he touched it again.
But maybe I'm just reading it wrong. :)