Wonderfull!

I'm outta words!

This was simply wonderful ... just wonderful.

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this is awesome. before i couldnt really see the yoko/kittan thing too much, but you've hella convinced me. its so sweet to see a fanfic in which the two actually have an emotional connection and i can see yoko returning his feelings

This was so sweet, I felt bad for Yoko in the anime, always losing her men. " Anyway, loved this story, I think you got her pretty in character. 3

I loved it. this anime by it self is one of my faves probably the best I seen in years. your fic captured the characters with fine art brought them to live in words.

Thank you.

Awesome fic.

Kittan x Yoko is just beautiful, and everything just fitted so well I could really see it as a part of the series.

Hope to read more from you.

Beautiful fic! I love YokoXKittan (far more that Yoko/Kamina, which alway sfelt forced and less real to me). It's nice to see this fic exploring this couple which was ended before it began.

I love to imagine Kittan living on that small island with Yoko, maybe working some small job at her school, or in a place in the town. I thought about doing a fic exploring this storyline, maybe I will someday.

I always imagined Yoko being the one to tell the Black sisters about Kittan, just to show how close she had become to him, but your way probably makes more sense. great work.

Read this while listening to Rap wa Kan no Tamashii

BAW ;_;

Absolutely beautiful. Heart wrenching, beautiful, amazing! I'd like to imagine that is what really happened before Kittan's departure. Everything would feel much more complete. Let me just make it canon in my mind. lawl. I love this. beautifully written.

Ah, awesome. Finally someone who breaks the 50 word barrier in this fandom.

It's really well written. Both from a formatting point of view, and from the content. You wrote Yoko really well. And I like what you did with the last scene, that one last sentence.

Really well written, I hope you write more GL fanfiction.

See you around here.

You are amazing. I was truly amazed by the way you wrote this story. You described the emotions of the characters, especially Yoko, brilliantly. I could not ask for anything better than this, and I couldn't find anything at all wrong with it.

I know these are only praises, but honestly, that's how I feel about it. Thank you so much for writing this, because I know I could not have done this well.

~JSB