Reviews for Demonic Maelstrom
Zentari2238 chapter 10 . 3/3
A story in which Naruto likes to take it up the ass and be the embodiment of pathetic. Everyone likes him though , for some reason.
Guest chapter 19 . 8/26/2014
Btw it's not maelstrom it's maelstorm
Guest chapter 19 . 8/25/2014
Trust me I know what hell looks like and I'm going there this Saturday I'm going bowling with satan
Guest chapter 17 . 8/24/2014
You got that right... that really didn't sound right
Guest chapter 16 . 8/24/2014
The parts from when he woke up and the ending were fucking awesome!
Guest chapter 12 . 8/22/2014
I liked that kiss part great detail
Guest chapter 10 . 8/22/2014
I really doubt that I would hate you for writing about the wave arc
Guest chapter 8 . 8/21/2014
I liked the ending it was creepy yet somehow heart breaking but still creepy.
Sfrbcry chapter 18 . 8/19/2014
Anko, either change your personality back to when I liked you, or leave. Grarrw.
But aside from that, loving the story so far!
Sfrbcry chapter 16 . 8/19/2014
Me: Anko, I normally love you. Yet, right now, I'm spamming you with mental death threats.
Chrisfragger chapter 8 . 12/13/2013
I do not like your attack on patriots.
Guest chapter 9 . 12/13/2013
I do not like your attack on patriots...
Chrisfragger chapter 4 . 12/13/2013
Such a sad scene at the end even if much wasn't said.
DEBob19 chapter 13 . 7/4/2013
Jeezus fucking christ I'd have murdered this Sakura so long ago. The first time she hit or kicked Naruto I'd have turned her into a bloody smear. Fucking worthless bitch.

Fun times with Anko and Yuugao.
Badgedbadger chapter 11 . 2/26/2013
Hmm... I think this is the first fic I've read where Sasuke failed to pin the Demon Brothers' chain with a kunai. Nice touch.
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