Reviews for Sick
LilinAnade chapter 1 . 9/25/2022
Wonderful short story!
Thanks for the story ;)
2077 chapter 1 . 7/14/2021
wow. That shit hit like a truck. Dunno if any of this is even remotely cannon, but it certainly sounds like it should be. Your take on Ed's and Roy's mental state is probably accurate. Heartbreakingly so. And your writing ... Its amazing. The astounding descriptions, the agonizing thoughts and dialogue come together to create an incredibly desolate and realistic atmosphere. Its on par with published GrimDark I've read. Truly worth reading.
howardrhonda828 chapter 1 . 4/16/2021
Honestly, is any of this really surprising? People forget that Ed was TWELVE when he joined the military, already suffering trauma that no child should with his mother and the failed transmutation. Then the whole thing with Nina happened and yeah, why wouldn't this kid be a wreck? It makes total, depressing sense that Ed would engage in this kind of self-destructive behavior and it's honestly a miracle he isn't MORE fucked up all things considered.

Anyway, I agree that Roy shouldn't tell Alphonse what Edward did... Ed should. Toxic masculinity is the worst, since it forces to men to hide their feelings and their pain because it's viewed as "weak". Men are pushed to be tough all the time and are made fun of for crying or being emotional in a way that isn't solely aggressive.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/13/2021
ahhh... THE FEELS
Guest chapter 1 . 2/12/2021
nice job. ;D
NarutoAdmirer21 chapter 1 . 11/8/2020
Wow, this is so sad
It explores these emotions so well and this sad connection the two feel is heartbreaking
It was a wonderfully tragic story
ShinyKyu chapter 1 . 10/16/2020
Holy fuck, the tears are not stopping. It’s even sadder because normally, no one ever thinks Ed would be the suicidal type, even after Nina’s death, since he’s always been such a strong character who never gave up after he lost his limbs, or during the automail surgery and rehab. And yet, it’s all too real and it HURTS so much. Triple sad because Roy was about to rip into him until he basically said Roy’s teasing and insults added to his already terrible sense of self-worth.
Tisran chapter 1 . 8/21/2020
Thanks for strory ! Its super !
Guest chapter 1 . 6/10/2020
Wow. This hit hard. I love how Roy wanted to be like the father to Ed he never had, interesting dynamic and way to make the angst more profound :’)
DaylightDark chapter 1 . 11/11/2019
This is a masterpiece. Really.
Marcellebelle chapter 1 . 8/13/2019
Oh my god... Edward...
iEliteRoyale chapter 1 . 6/28/2019
Your writing skills are simply incredible... I'll have to say that this is one of the best fanfics I've ever read.
Noxvae chapter 1 . 6/25/2019
This is a freaking masterpiece !
Rookblonkorules chapter 1 . 5/26/2019
That was an ending I didn't expect! Poor Edward!
Bemused Writer chapter 1 . 9/15/2018
This is an excellent story! Poor Ed... At least he's getting some help.
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