Está historia es una reverenda mierda. ¿Rin viva? ¿Por qué? ¿Pa qué? ¿Y dónde está Kushina? No me vas a decir que está muerta, porque es imposible. Ella fallece luego de que Minato usará el jutsu del shinigami, siendo atravesada por la misma garra que atravesó a Minato. Y el embarazo lo único que afectaba era en qué debilitaba el sello, razón por la que pudieron liberar a Kurama, ¿En serio aparece Rin que debería estar bien muerta y no Kushina? ¿Pero dejaste vivo al inútil de Minato? ¿En serio?

i was highly concerned that this wasnt soul- time-traveling and was full time-traveling...

Adult naruto is not loud and annoying …

J'adore, je suis un grand fan des fics voyages dans le temps j'adore c'est ma catégorie préféré.
J'adore ton écriture et le harem est parfait c'est logique même.

Intéressant.

La base était que itachi à tue le clan à cause d'un coup d'état et itachi était d'idée au village.

Tenía la esperanza que cuando Naruto llegara al pasado actuaría cool y sabio pero parece no es el caso y veo que el kyubi se cree todo poderoso y que lo sabe todo

So the author here destroys and butchers the respect I had for him by being the Uchiha asskisser. I mean all the rest are at best a match for the clan? The clan which was massacred by Itachi and according to some theories Obito? So the entire Konoha including three bijuu are at best a match for Itachi? If not t had been a worst case scenario of Uchiha clan being equal in strength to the rest of them then it would have been marginally acceptable but this! It feels like author has a shrine where he worships the shit excreted by Uchiha

i am very disappointed because of not completion of this story. this good character development and story telling

how on earth could he have prevented his dad's death?

and him being executed is truly a very stupid plot device for him to die. they live in a military dictatorship! the non-ninjas have no actual power over them jesus

It's not to bad, but very underwhelming the more chapters one reads. The power levels are absolutely all over the place. Sometimes Naruto is powerful at other times he is barley at the level before he got on his training trip... I mean the whole thing with Oroshimaru was a nonsense Cluster fuck.
With his Parents alive, all the knowledge and time to train he should be much more powerful but like I said , the more you read the less his impact matter or at least it feels that way

lucky bastard lol

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Not a bad story, but waaaaay to AU.

i am pretty sure the one kill shishui is danzo