Reviews for Naruto: Back to the Unknown
dragonfox123 chapter 1 . 4h
Interesting chapter and plot and amazing idea
bananaananas chapter 2 . 8/31
You need to learn how to use "tenses". You only use present tense, it comes out wrong and makes this story annoying to read.
Josue Benjamin chapter 23 . 7/11
excelente fanfic espero que lo continue este es de los pocos fanfic harem que tienen una buena historia sin necesitar lemon continue excelente trabajo¬°
Naruto fan 90 chapter 23 . 5/16
good job
Monster King chapter 23 . 3/6
Great story I really liked it a shame that it looks like you gave up on it.
arrgh chapter 14 . 2/28
Is there any lemons...i got my pervert senses say me in class yugito was gonna have sex ..but it was abolished so dovu have or this one fucking harem does even have lemons
arrgh chapter 4 . 2/28
now ur telling me kyubi is sealed in naruto ...u forgot ur own story fucker...u wrote shingami took him , somewhere u wrote silver fox telling naruto though kyubi is not sealed in him he is a blah blah...so u suck in remembering ur own story
arrgh chapter 4 . 2/28
i m think this is getting boring and bringing legendry sanniin huh! this really make things messed up
idea chapter 1 . 2/28
Great idea of starting i m looking more into this story
8 chapter 10 . 1/14
Continue plz
gues chapter 6 . 1/9
Rally dont see the need to kill both itachi and shisui. Minata would not have agreed to it. He just acked like Danzo.
Guest chapter 7 . 12/4/2016
Create a fiction where naruto goes to a DC univers where all the justice league members are female including some villans
king gilgamesh chapter 6 . 11/19/2016
never thought I'd find myself calling a story naieve but here I am
Guest chapter 1 . 10/10/2016
SOOOO CRinGY
Guest chapter 6 . 9/30/2016
Well, I like where the romance part is going, that Narutos parents are alive and that they have future knowledge... but there are 3 things that annoy me. 1. The Bijuus are way too nice/human alike 2. Kyuubi wanting to make Narutos his successor is way too ridiculous 3. The whole Ushia thing makes no sense. They planned a civil war and Itachi was ordered to stop them in canon. Why would they kill him now for no reason?
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