Reviews for Naruto: Back to the Unknown
TheNiemand chapter 23 . 3/4
I like it, I support it. But seriousely your update rate has to improve.
Tman chapter 7 . 2/1
That's so weird. What happened to naruto and hinata I really liked that!
Guest chapter 23 . 1/20
Update soon awesome story
SuperVegitoFAN chapter 1 . 1/9
i like the idea although you are truly messing around with canon.

true at the date of posting this chapter its very excuseable, just wanted to let ya know that the reaper death seal is no more godlike than a bomb is.

thats how it is in canon anyways BUT au stories are plenty soo...
elorielee chapter 23 . 1/5
Great story, just getting interesting!
Guest chapter 8 . 11/18/2013
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Silent Avid Magma chapter 1 . 11/1/2013
Grammar, syntax, spelling, and word usage are all good.

Plot is acceptable if predictable.

However, you may not post a story in 2007 and only get 123k words done in six years.

Why would anyone follow this story with such a track history?

No thanks.

-Silence
Guest chapter 23 . 10/19/2013
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connor.carrera chapter 1 . 10/18/2013
Naruto preforms a time travel thing before he dies then he dies and gives him self as a sacrifice to the shinigami to save his dad A.K.A. Yondaime Hokage...nice twist but WHY not mix kyuubi and Naruto anyway?
Doris813 chapter 23 . 10/6/2013
Great story so far keep updating I'm at the edge of my seat wanting to know what happens next:) update soon proud follower 8D
Worsfold15 chapter 23 . 9/16/2013
cant wait for more
Guest chapter 23 . 9/16/2013
Great fic cant wait for more
WriteMeALife chapter 23 . 9/14/2013
NOOOOOOOO! I Want More! This story is amazing and I love your writing style and the idea you changed Naruto into. I want you to continue writing this forever! (More like till after Naruto is the Kyuubi, but still). NEED. MORE. Nuff said.
Herotribe chapter 1 . 8/26/2013
good story
Awinarock chapter 2 . 8/10/2013
Good god, too much dialogue. If you're still continuing this fic, try to rewrite this chapter because it's just fucking awful. Barely any description, too much dialogue, no references to the fate of Kushina and the mood of the Uchiha clan, no references to how the Yondaime's continued life affects the politics of Konoha and the elemental nations, and incorrect tenses everywhere.
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