Reviews for Naruto: Back to the Unknown |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it, one of the best time travel ones that I have read. Naruto's actions are very understandable and the popularity he enjoys as his father's son and the rumoured defeater of the fox also explains why people listen to him initially... then he just takes them in with his charming personality! :) Great Work, waiting for the next chapter. Cheers! Anna |
![]() ![]() ![]() Will na ga yu have animal ears and tails |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor poor Naruto-kun... (Lucky bastard!) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Who is in the harem |
![]() ![]() ![]() The chapter was cool and the battles were great. |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol, Naruto is so whipped ;P |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome fights! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh my ... lee not getting that the discussion between him and temari was kind of sexual was just like him ... and of course priceless ;) (or at least not getting it immediately) and with this ended the first day of the final exams, looking for the other days |
![]() ![]() And thus Naruto gets started on the first girl of his harem. |
![]() ![]() I am enjoying the the story quite a bit. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter, and I'm glad you're updating again. |
![]() ![]() Why would you kill off itachi? There was no real reason to, or was this written before we found out that Itachi was really a good guy? Plz reply at Itachi was my favorite... :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() well, i just wish you would give hinata a more vital role...atleast more than tenten- i always felt that hinata was stronger than tenten... and happy new year |
![]() ![]() Great story! Hope 2 c nxt chptr soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hidy hidy, Likes: Eh, the course of the story and getting through things so quickly isn't bad. As young as they are, it's actually kind of nice not to have to deal with a crap load of story before the real things starts. I'm happy to find out what happened to Kushina. I feel like I've begun this story before, but not sure. Some bits feel like I've seen them before, but that could just be the fact it's fanfiction. Dislikes: I'm not really fond of the lack of character depth or development. I mean, we had an opportunity to see what Hinata was like while her mother was still alive and when she's young, not to mention see if she and Naruto are actually friends or not. He's already friends with Tenten, after all. Basically, I'm just not happy with how little detail you put in the story regarding the people themselves. Minato is a pushover and he does what Naruto tells him to do rather than the two having a discussion about possibilities. And Naruto should know it would be better in the end to tell his father about the various members of Akatsuki so they can be hunted down. Especially the ones that are practically immortal, before they get together and end up even stronger, while the element of surprise is still on Konoha's side. Naruto also knows where Orochimaru is going to be building his bases, at least in part, so they could keep an eye on things there. Basically, he's pulling a Dumbledore (if you're a Harry Potter reader) and keeping all information to himself and not really getting rid of problems before they actually become one. I'd prefer the character development, though, if one of these things were going to be fixed. Also, without the Princess leaving the village, her movies won't be created and her own country won't be able to reap the benefits of her fame from that. |