| Reviews for Naruto: Back to the Unknown |
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   Alpenwolf chapter 7 . 12/9/2012 hehehe ... I really doubt sasuke's fangirls in the other timeline could have thought or agreed to share sasuke xD |
| Crazed King chapter 8 . 11/20/2012 Cool! |
| Eisenstein chapter 19 . 11/15/2012 Hm, continuity error: at the time of the chuunin exams, Yoroi and Misumi are supposed to be participants (and thus, in this story, currently training for the finale), while the original Isaribi storyline is supposed to happen quite a while (months at least) later and these two having been working for Amachi months already, having shown some stronger abilities than in the exams. So, even ignoring the skill differences, here they are at two far different places in basically the same time frame. So you should (have) replace(d) these two by other goons (named or not). |
| Eisenstein chapter 16 . 11/15/2012 Well, at least there was a little distrust on Zabuzas side, if I read his question to Haku right. And Raiga needing a reason also makes a little more sense this way. Still, I think both were too easily swayed from their contract work for Gato(u). Naruto famous? No Problem. As the "Baby Hero" with a flee on sight order already? Golden Burn, so to say I don't think he'll be happy unless he gets rid of that moniker fast. I guess he would even prefer the (fan) famous nickname "The Orange Swarm" over "Baby Hero" ;P |
| Eisenstein chapter 15 . 11/15/2012 Persuading the Ex-Kiri team went quite a bit too smoothly, remembering the strong sense of pride Zabuza had, even if he would have had to admit being outclassed - and by genin kids to boot. Also, simply repeating his canon setup after what the brothers would have had to tell was very stupid. It might have been better if Zabuza had been shown to be curious and willing to talk before being caught. Well, maybe the next chapter shows a twist or two, otherwise as I said: too easy. |
| Eisenstein chapter 13 . 11/15/2012 Leaving a note here: C sharp |
| Irish Shift chapter 21 . 10/29/2012 please update this is a really good story |
| Irish Shift chapter 11 . 10/29/2012 sooo your going with a mega-harem? |
| Irish Shift chapter 8 . 10/29/2012 even after she confesses her love for him in the pain attack in the last go round...wow just wow |
| Irish Shift chapter 7 . 10/28/2012 I love this story please update |
| 10th Squad 3rd Seat chapter 3 . 10/19/2012 3 Bijuu and 3 |
| 10th Squad 3rd Seat chapter 2 . 10/18/2012 Nice going for a four year old. |
| 10th Squad 3rd Seat chapter 1 . 10/18/2012 Nice!I take it as revenge when Naruto wan't killed. |
| JaCk-o'-LaNtErN 91 chapter 11 . 10/5/2012 nice story |
| Zobx chapter 21 . 9/19/2012 Please continue greatly enjoying this twist in the story |