I know Matatabi's name wasn't revealed yet when you wrote this, but naming her Nekomata is like Kurama being named Kitsune.

Grammar sucks. There is nothing to say about it.

The tenses of the sentences are so fucking retarded it hurts me to read it.

But the real brain freeze of this story is a simple fact that Naruto, the Sixth Hokage, simply gave up and let NORMAL people execute him. The Daimyo is NOTHING but a normal person with some political power. The ENTIRE reason why he can rule in Narutoverse is that he has money to hire ninjas to fight other ninjas. See where the problem of this story is yet? No ninjas meaning no ninjas to fight against Naruto. He is supposed to be this uber-strong Kyuubi Jinchuuriki and Sixth Hokage and yet NORMAL people subdued him? Really...

This is a great story. Wish it was more to it.

note

I really like this story also and would definitely love to see more sometime in the future. Hopefully you haven't abandoned your stories.

I like the story

Sucks

Nani?! Ginko is kyubbi's daughter and is going to be MARRIED to naruto. That was unexpected.

I still see you shadows in my room

Um... I think nibi's name is matatabi not nekomata

kl

Hmm. No kushina? I wonder if you are trying to copy canon timeline or what, cause Rin died much earlier, like a few months after obito.

Executioner, do you job.
Lol idiot

as much as i like the story it would be better if it got updated instead of abandoned

Hanabi a snitch