I forgot to say this in the another chapter but daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaamn hanabi is a snitch

it’s interesting, but almost impossible to follow who’s saying what, since all you do is just put things in quotations with no indication on who’s speaking.

Great story I can't wait to read the new chapters please update this story soon thanks.

I’m sorry but itachis death is uncessary and you have a horrible understanding of mikoto even if she was a character with a solid 2-4 appearances she isn’t a schemer and wouldn’t involve herself in the betrayal of her best friend. Also if you can prevent shishuis death you would know that danzo planned it all if you kill danzo fugaku would lose confidence in he coup and most likely back out. Saskue was also before the massacre a fairly ok human being. Lastly naruto is a walking tactical nuke of pre-existing prejudice even though he is the butterfly effect and could have worked with his old man to prevent the coup cause as hokage he should have read over those files for SS-S rank secrets.

A good story, and it has a very good plot. If you make a continuation or continue
the same story will be very cool and that the continuation is very makes you a great fanfic writer, and please continue the story.

Interesting chapter and plot and amazing idea

You need to learn how to use "tenses". You only use present tense, it comes out wrong and makes this story annoying to read.

excelente fanfic espero que lo continue este es de los pocos fanfic harem que tienen una buena historia sin necesitar lemon continue excelente trabajo¡

good job

Great story I really liked it a shame that it looks like you gave up on it.

Is there any lemons...i got my pervert senses say me in class yugito was gonna have sex ..but it was abolished so dovu have or this one fucking harem does even have lemons

now ur telling me kyubi is sealed in naruto ...u forgot ur own story fucker...u wrote shingami took him , somewhere u wrote silver fox telling naruto though kyubi is not sealed in him he is a blah blah...so u suck in remembering ur own story

i m think this is getting boring and bringing legendry sanniin huh! this really make things messed up

Great idea of starting i m looking more into this story

Continue plz