I like this story so far tis very good _

oh! please tell me that Ino, Temari & Tenten are in the harem

Hi,

O like this story. The Prologue is a bit dark but after reading Chapter 1 O truely must say this story could have a really great future. I can have really exiting adventures, lots of romance but also lots of comedy. Just think of all the pranks Naruto could play, the many misunderstandings in his or Kakashis and Rins love life or his interactions with his ba-chan and the ero-sanin.

As for a title I'd go for something like Second time around- The love life and adventures of the the Sixth Hokage.

CU

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