|Reviews for Chocolate|
| maraudering88 chapter 1 . 6/2/2011
Dude, you. Are. A. Genius. it's nice to read about them not being all innocent and virginal, it's funny!
"his brain had simultaneously imploded and exploded. He gathered up the few leftover pieces of shrapnel previously known as coherent thought and spoke." - you had me at this line, LOL. I just lost it here ))
| Random Little Remus Lover chapter 1 . 9/16/2009
lol that was very funny ]
| kissyourself chapter 1 . 7/12/2009
Aww, chocolate. :) 'nuff said.
| ExpletiveExpert chapter 1 . 3/5/2009
awesome, I loved it, it was hi-larious XD
| xFeathersxx chapter 1 . 2/25/2009
Oh, I so love you.
"his brain had simultaneously imploded and exploded."
"My future plans of sitting on a curb binging on Ho Hos and hard liquor have been foiled"
I love it.
| Akai-chan chapter 1 . 12/19/2008
Would it be bad of me to say that I enjoyed that because I thought it was intelligent humor? Plus, I really like that lightly sarcastic, less dramatic side of Bella. It was refreshing.
| crazeeria chapter 1 . 12/11/2008
lol i really enjoyed it. I loved bella's humor lol. good job!
| MidnightxRed chapter 1 . 10/21/2008
This is hillarious.
i love it!
| jolie7886 chapter 1 . 8/5/2008
Excellent. Humorous!Bella well characterized. Although I hope you're aware that you spelled "daiquiri" wrong.
| lyndsey morgan chapter 1 . 7/31/2008
wow..this is gonna be fun!
| Cla.V chapter 1 . 6/6/2008
Poor Edward! Hahahahahah
| lauracullen chapter 1 . 6/4/2008
cool! this is great ! and the guys are really in character, a cute piece of bedward fluff
| paper.creations chapter 1 . 5/23/2008
So random it was hilarious!
| Wishes and Words and Etcetera chapter 1 . 5/23/2008
So cute! Cant wait to see what happens next!
| EdwardObsessed chapter 1 . 4/5/2008
Hahah wow Random but very very good!