|Reviews for Green Street Hooligans: What could have been|
| Desire chapter 31 . 10/23/2017
I have watched the Movie more than 100 times and everytime in this Scene i cry like a child and i love this Fanfic soo much. And i cry right now too because this is so heartbreaking and i hate it so much in the movie that Pete dies but thank god you don't let him die i think i can breath again :D
| Kyarla643 chapter 41 . 12/3/2016
Read this one within 3 bloody days.
Pretty proud of myself :D.
I've loved Green Street Hooligans since I was a little cheeky girl. Even tho I still am
I'd just like to say that I love this impressive story, your style of writing is great
There's no Cons about this book. The way you wrote the description of the characters and the dialogue... Mate... I couldn't read anything better.
This is basically a story that I always want to read.
I'm sad that it's over. I'm gonna promise myself that I'll read it again when I'm in my 60's.
More feedback. I love how you got the readers emotions and how you got me hooked within the first few paragraphs, this is the BEST GSH I've read so far. Hopefully there's more like this.
I thank the lord for helping me find this aye.
Thank you darlin for a great story, you really made my 3 days!
| BornInTheUSA chapter 41 . 1/21/2016
You are a brilliant writer, I've read this stories a couple of time because I just love reading these characters you have created, you write so clearly and I can just imagine everything in perspective. These stories of yours are defiantly my favorites.
| LongRun chapter 39 . 12/18/2014
Oooh, I wanted to hear this story too. Again. And again. And see Harry's reaction to it.
I felt nervous and excited about Pete's and Allie's wedding - pretty much as I feel about weddings in real life. Because weddings *are* scary. So... great writing, lol. I guess I won't be able to sleep today.
| ItsNotUItsE chapter 26 . 4/24/2014
Pulled an all-nighter reading up to chap 25. Looking forward to pulling another one tonight. One of the best fan fictions!
| Lauren chapter 1 . 3/23/2014
Waiting with baited breath for the end of intervals while preparing myself for the worst I have returned once again to re-read WCHB and reminisce in the awesomeness that is Pete and Allie. Your a truly great writer thank you for putting this story out there for so many of us to enjoy
| Lauren. C. Powell chapter 41 . 2/21/2014
This is the third time I've read this story, and I just realised ... Lara is kind if described as looking like Danneel Harris just with small Boobs, who is quite fitting concidering she's gorgeous and I don't see anyone else as her :)
Love your story though :) it's amazing, can't wait to read your other stories
| Guest chapter 43 . 12/16/2013
So sad to hear your awesome work is being ripped off. I love this story and have read an re read it countless times.
I am about to start 6 weeks of holidays and am looking forward to relaxing and re reading all of your fics hopefully maybe an update or two as well haha
Hope the mess gets sorted keep up the amazing writing :-) :-)
| Little Miss Bovver chapter 43 . 12/3/2013
This is devastating, I cannot believe how callous some people are. Thinking of you, Ella and I am always here to talk I hope this can be sorted. Keep your head held high, it won't end well for her x
| NL92 chapter 43 . 12/3/2013
Damn :( thought this was an update,but I'm pissed for you,I'll keep an eye you update and get this problem sorted soon :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/25/2013
Name of the story is: Light Up The Dark by Bessie374
| S chapter 1 . 11/25/2013
The link doesnt work but you can find the story on:
one direction fanfiction . com
the name of the story is:
Light Up The Dark by Bessie374
| S chapter 1 . 11/25/2013
just wanted to let you know that someone used your story and changed the names. She turned it into a one direction story.. just letting you know
| LonePalm chapter 4 . 8/19/2013
Love the Allie & Lara sisterhood!
| LonePalm chapter 3 . 8/18/2013
Absolutely love that Pete didn't realize Allie had already given him her number!
Gah! I love this story more every time that I read it!