Reviews for Servitude
Isabella and me chapter 2 . 6/20/2009
...chuck norris doesnt really know where i live does he i dont want to be roundhoused kicked!oh can you have yuffie make one of them dance for her? hula!reno :3
Spoiled Martian chapter 2 . 3/3/2008
Please update sooner than the previous chapter. I like the idea of the fanfiction but try to write the characters as true to their nature. Try not to overexaggerate on their dialouge. Subtle is the key. Update please.
MysticSpiritus chapter 2 . 3/3/2008
Chuck Norris is fucking overrated. *gets knocked to the ground by a roundhouse kick* *enter the real Mystic*

Dude, isn't my body double cool? Anyway, cool chapter! Vincent is bunking with Yuffie and Cloud is giving massages. Awesome!

Mystic

*body double is still dead*
DreamlessRiver chapter 2 . 3/2/2008
This is funny, as well as original, but Cloud seems OOC. Maybe make him talk in smaller sentences? Just a small tip :)

Update soon.
dantesdarkqueen chapter 2 . 3/2/2008
Heh. Cloud gets to rub his hands all over two hot, mostly-naked, lubed-up women, and Vincent gets to shack up with Yuffie, whether he likes it or not. Plus Cloud seems to be very good at giving massages. So how long is Yuffie going to force them to serve her? And what are the chances that Tifa will sneak into Cloud's room full a more thorough 'massage'? Vincent needs to start praying that Yuffie doesn't get horny while he guards her room...

Can't wait to see what Her Highness makes the rest of them do...

-Queen
sparkreno chapter 2 . 3/2/2008
I think that this story has much potential...that being said, perhaps you could try a little more substance and not so much fluff...this is comedic so don't lose sight of it...
DarknessAeon chapter 1 . 12/7/2007
I do hope that you keep going on with this. It is really good and very funny. I liked how Yuffie is making Cloud give her and Tifa a full-body massage. I loved it.
RaptureEntice chapter 1 . 12/6/2007
HAHA this is funny..
My-Sanity-Went-B00m chapter 1 . 12/1/2007
Where's Vincent? Oh god, this is halarious! Cloud is so gullible. "Other Red, Turkey." I loved that XD.
mai-mai chapter 1 . 12/1/2007
pretty intriguing...continue please
BrokenAnzaran chapter 1 . 12/1/2007
so is vincent there and this is great cant wait to see more!
MysticSpiritus chapter 1 . 12/1/2007
How come she gets Reno as a servant too? Lucky bitch...

Mystic