Reviews for Vows
LunaNotLoony chapter 1 . 11/17/2013
A bit confusing but the best stories don't hand you everything on a plate. Bit cliched, but good.
FlubberyFlobberworms chapter 1 . 1/6/2012
I think you capture it pretty well!(: Loved the last line!~
Amarante chapter 1 . 7/15/2011
Absolutely beautiful. C:
Guest chapter 1 . 6/30/2011
A talented writer, really!:)
Guest chapter 1 . 6/30/2011
Great job!:)
TwiTragic13 chapter 1 . 7/8/2010


Allaray chapter 1 . 2/22/2010
excellent. I like you're style of writing and enjoyed the thoughts going through Snape's head, the flashbacks. Very good.
La-Mer-De-Lune chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
It was very sad but well written. Oh Severus...
BookLover223 chapter 1 . 10/22/2009
I Loved it, and it's good to find another HP fan who loves veronica mars[yes she is a marshmellow]
Hanah Potter chapter 1 . 12/27/2008
So sweet.
LilyPetal97 chapter 1 . 12/9/2008
Its great I love it. I think I'll try this sort of writing.
Hermione-Hermyown chapter 1 . 2/8/2008
That was a beautiful story and it actually brought tears to my eyes. It was written very well. Keep up the good work! I absolutely loved it.
Winnie chapter 1 . 12/6/2007
I really enjoyed that story. I think you captured Snape's voice very well. I loved the flash backs- they mix a bit of irony into the story.


lilyfan06 chapter 1 . 12/3/2007
very good. i like your style of writing. and the flash backs were a nice touch.
Lacewings chapter 1 . 12/1/2007
I love, love, love this line.

"The wind shifted one last time, settling into an icy chill from the North that brought no promises and told no lies"

Something about it sends chills down my back.

I wasn't sure of the vow he was going to make.

Was he vowing to become a Death Eater?

On a whole, it was beautifully written. There are some certain chunks I had to read more than once to fully understand what was being said, but otherwise the composure is flawless.

Your Fan,

Jones the Word-Eater
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