Reviews for A Mother's Love
Zeke Hooper chapter 101 . 11/17
good story.
Zeke Hooper chapter 86 . 11/17
well, that was a twist. so pain isn't Nagato.
Zeke Hooper chapter 26 . 11/15
you killed Neji.
Lord Erethar chapter 9 . 10/28
While the story does not have any grammatical issues, and it’s pacing is decent, there is a serious issue in that many of the characters are extremely OOC. I get it to a degree, people and situations are bound to change based on the premise of the story, however not to the degree that is shown by some characters. It’s clear that either the author has not seen/read the whole of the series, or has made a unilateral decision to base a lot of the characters motives and personalities on impressions given by the earlier points in the series. Itachi in the specific chapter shows that most of all, being clearly based around the “killed my clan to rest my strength” impression of the earlier series rather than what is shown to be his actually feelings and thoughts from the later series. All in all, while the series was clearly going to be an AU setting, there was no indication that the character’s personalities and motives would vary so wildly.
k.deathnote.5 chapter 1 . 10/6
SHWAT the use of-san, -chan, and -kun are to show respect with the -san at the end of a persons name unless said person gives you permission to not use the honorification at the end of their name. While -chan and -kun are used for friendly individuals who are close to one another.
SHWAT chapter 15 . 10/5
Why are all your original names in English...
So jarring when you use -san -chan and -kun, even when it is not required...
Dancert chapter 1 . 9/27
Nice story and meet ideea, I like it.
EVIL-SAGE chapter 101 . 8/17
The best naruto story i have ever read realistic and satisfying
Noreen I-shi chapter 19 . 8/16
Hmm okay i done here, not because the story bad. It's just my teste, i wanna to read about mc without 1 absolute pair, especially since kid.

Hmm for you who wanna reading this, j recommended this for you who's find fresh story and fine chars development, and a pious a only wife
Noreen I-shi chapter 4 . 8/15
So far so good, not disappointed for me
Naruto elite covenant chapter 68 . 8/12
It did take them a while to find out that Naruto had been kidnapped, but they reacted quickly. I only hope to see how Kushina will react when she finds out.
Xenokiller419 chapter 8 . 7/10
Why the hell would you nerf the uzumaki clan so hard they don't know seals even though that was one of the reasons they where exterminated by 3 hidden villages and it was kushina who taught minato how to use seals they don't have a bloodline the uzumaki clan had multiple bloodlines and the reason they have red hair and where masters at sealing and the reason kumo wanted to capture kushina so I don't know why you are saying the namikaze are a very powerful old clan when they where just created by minato when he became hokage and he was an orphan
rageouss chapter 21 . 6/27
"I guess I just don't have it in me to kill someone I consider a friend, even when they've taken away someone I love." Naruto answered tiredly.

rageouss chapter 6 . 6/15
'"No," Naruto said seriously. "My father was the hero who saved this village from the Kyuubi. He gave everything to save Konoha. I want to be like him and even greater. I love Konoha and its people and I want to protect them and keep them safe. And I want to be better than any who came before otherwise what's the point?"'

but why?! seriously, why in the fuck?! WHY?! even his mother is brainwashing him! what reason could this guy possibly have to love the village?! every fanfic is the same, 99% just casually brainwash the MC into loving the village, even if they were all good to him, why would he dedicate his life to be a pencil pusher hokage?! WTF MAN
alefrosier chapter 2 . 6/13
Finally a decent Kushina, without that crap to forgive the villagers have to kill anyway, I just wish he didn't want to be hokage, just the nonsense of putting the village above the well being of his family should already be a reason for Naruto not wanting to be hokage
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