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Whoa, I have had this idea the whole time haha. Good fic, I'm inspired and writing my own now. thanks!

The idea of the Grand Alliance is as revolutionary as I imagine the shinobi villages were for the ninja clans at the time, but Jiraiya is right, it requires a lot of power to carry out such a project. I don't think that either Danzō or the Uchiha clan are happy with his peace project. Suigetsu as Orochimaru's successor, I don't imagine that. And Yugito Nii in Konoha, it's obvious that Naruto likes to get into trouble.

I'm sorry, but I'm stopping here.
I'm a bit picky about details and the naming thing is getting to me.
Your storyline is very interesting, but the naming thing ruins it for me.
Happy writing.

Dellona?

Hannah Hyuuga?
Seriously?

Also, somebody please tell the stupid villagers that if Naruto dies, then the Kyuubi is released.

the dialogue is complete ass, its super choppy and awkward.

He can just become a God of War and protect Konoha that way, no need to become Hokage.

I'm reading this for the first time after 101 chapters are completed and I read about Haku showing off his pet rabbit. My first thought was, "Why does Haku have a rabbit?" Then it hit me...

I love the little detail there.

Dude is eight and fighting a Jounin, calm down Itachi.

Interesting fact about birthday wishes: they have quite a dark origin, as prayers to the false goddess “Artemis”. The cake was shaped like the moon, and light was provided to emulate the moon’s glow. It’s all pagan (dun dun dun), like Halloween and saturnalia (christmas). I had a friend that would not do trick or treating because of that (which is praiseworthy; to stick my monotheistic morals).

its galling that this romance battle is being fought by kids, 8 year old kids planning and plotting for romance

I'm not sure why Kushina and Tsunade would even entertain the idea of having Haku compete in the chunin exams in Mist. The place is still actively murdering anyone with a kekkei genkai in this fic and sending Haku there just seems incredibly stupid

Jiraiya could've summoned a different toad after Gamabunta dispelled instead of wasting 20 minutes running back to Konoha.

Shikamaru has insane rizz it seems