Reviews for Warmth
Cam135 chapter 1 . 10/6/2012
Epic
Lizzy '-' rocks chapter 1 . 5/10/2012
This was freaking awesome! It's emotional, angsty, and parental but not so much that it's creepy or OOC at all... Poor Ed.
SoullessElric chapter 1 . 12/9/2011
I really liked that! I really, REALLY liked that! I honestly can't say that I'm all that sad about Rose, cuz I'm just one of those people who don't care most of the time about reading or writing death. But Ed's reaction hit me hard. I really liked the way the story made you want to jump in there and hug Ed until he's not depressed anymore. It really gets the reader involved with the story! The pacing was a bit rushed, but just a bit, and the storyline itself made up for any bad changes in pace. Please reply! :D
MelancholyMadness chapter 1 . 5/17/2011
Your style was great and the way you write is very interesting! It wasn't too wordy or underworded and it was very cute in a tragic sort of way!

-ash
Masaki4everDead chapter 1 . 12/8/2010
Oh this was soo good. It has such potential to be more than a oneshot in my opinion but anyway it was just so cute with the parental affection between Roy and Ed. GOOD JOB! XD
IOTR chapter 1 . 10/26/2010
Ugh, this killed me. Very well written and so sad. Amazing job, dear. ;u;
Cubed chapter 1 . 3/19/2009
Wonderful!

Have you considered making this into more then just a oneshot? (I say that purely for selfish reasons since you have such an addictive writing style; it makes me want more.)
demisemiquav3r chapter 1 . 2/1/2009
this was so nice, with roy willing to help ed during his weakness. parental!royeds are my favorites, thank you for sharing this!
Koibitotedare chapter 1 . 10/26/2008
poor ed he lose's just about everyone huh but what he doesn't realize is that in return he gains a person eqivalncy!
guitarmania07 chapter 1 . 12/19/2007
I just wanna say THANK YOU! I really love Parental!RoyEd and we need more of it instead of RoyEd and Elrict! RoyEd is phedophilia and dont get me started on incest! Anyway I really loved this oneshot! Can't wait for more!
The Sacred Pandapuff chapter 1 . 12/3/2007
War fic! They're so heartbreaking! Very harsh but at the same time gentle. I loved it.
jenelric chapter 1 . 12/2/2007
Aw that was so awesome! I love Paternal!RoyEd war fics! That was so cute, awesome job!
Bar-Ohki chapter 1 . 12/1/2007
That was beautiful and heart-warming.
The 'Blur' Witch chapter 1 . 12/1/2007
Wow. We need more stories like this. :) This was good. I am so adding you on to my favorites list!
Cold-Foxx chapter 1 . 12/1/2007
Aw! Brilliant! I loved the ending, and the whole thing was beautifully written. Thanks so much for writing it for me!

Speaking of requests, I am done with yours. It's no where near as good, but I' hope you like it nonetheless. I'm just about to post it.
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