Can you please update this?

I wonder if Naruto can acquire the abilities of Genzuome the same way Madara acquired Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan? If he kills her, and takes here eyes, could he marge them with his and evolve them?

Ah yep, this get abandoned before the preliminaries. Waste of time reading it in that case, since nothing actually happens

This story moves way WAY too slow for my liking. It's 200k words of filling it looks like. I'm 4/19 chapters and it looks like they're STILL in wave at ch5 even though Zabuza and Haku died back in ch1. I don't even see this story getting to the forest of death if all the chapters are like this, completely unnecessary

Assuming you can even use Naruto's Dojutsu (if it is one) if you take his eyes, I wonder if it'll just grow back since he can regrow organs with kuramas chakra if he uses enough (valley of the end chidori). Free copy eyes I guess

I wish the author just update the new chapter or at least finish the Chūnin Exams. I mean we wished to know what happen when Shizuka finish off the sound four. How will Naruto and Sasuke face the Preliminaries without Sakura if she not fit to fight. Would Naruto use Kyubi chakara when facing Kiba. Will Naruto get in rage over Neji for putting Hinata in that injury state? Would Gaara keep his murder urges in control? I and everyone wish he updates as best he can.

It’s extremely dumb ur trying to hide his ability even tho the only techniques he has are all related to it. Like the fuck is he supposed to do? Just get his ass kicked since he can’t reveal his shit. Super fucking stupid

I realy want to read a fanfic with naruto have little bit of common sense as atleast of 12 year old children.

This fanfic may be for children age 10 to 15.

That's why its irritating to read.

Naruto always an impulsive idiot and sakura will betray naruto for simple smile from sasuke

Here's a thought and this is just a thought I would have it so that the byaku chakra could actually be shaped into anything like weapons but then again that's just my thought but it's kind of like how vegeto uses his ki to make a sword over his hand but then again that's just me and I'm kind of crazy like that

I really liked ino & naruto's partnership in this. They could be best frnds.

oh? NOw u use the noise-dampening seals u fucking geezer! Where the hell did that go every time u discussed Naruto & Kyoukagan?!

Sasuke! Don't look at Naruto! Focus on Kimimaro, he's ur opponent., or rather ur enemy.

Fuck you Hiruzen, don't blame anko for not foreseeing or acting quickly upon Orochimaru's return, when it's ur inability, weakness & cowardness that lets Orochimaru getaway every time. You can't even kill or stop him. It's his cowardness that spread thru jiraiya & tusnade. Tsunade ran off after nawaki & dan's death. And jiraiya ran away after his teammates left. I wonder if orochi, tsuna & raiya had someone strong to guide them, then they wouldn't have lost path.

Oh fuck no! Why tf orochimaru has to find out about his bloodline limit!