|Reviews for could not erase it|
| orikami chapter 1 . 10/1/2017
Wow, I really loved this? The style was super interesting and it matched the voice of the piece. I love how it was sort of stream of consciousness/free flowing and fast paced, but at the same time set within the parameters of a fairytale - once upon a time and happily ever after.
Thank you for sharing this!
| exogenesissymph chapter 1 . 3/13/2014
Short and sweet. I love your formatting. There is no "-" before "Ever after" at the end. Did you do that on purpose?
| LunaSphere chapter 1 . 6/5/2009
Oh, the structure of this and how beautifully and intricately it fits with the meaning is amazing.
Thank you for this lovely piece.
| Mint Pearl Voice chapter 1 . 4/5/2009
This is amazing. Just... wow.
| Anti-Logic chapter 1 . 6/25/2008
I loved how at the end, I knew just what "RUE!" you were referring to.
| alchemyarchetype chapter 1 . 1/14/2008
Oh… That was wonderful. Poor Rue; she’s such a sad, broken little character but I love her so much. This is a wonderful piece and I really love how you kept interrupting the flow of the story with the next part, like little snapshots into Rue’s heart and mind. This was SO beautiful, well done!
| nechoco kitty chapter 1 . 12/30/2007
I love the snippets of stories and how they all weave together to create Rue's story. I especially like how the last and first sentences complete one another or something? I'm not sure how explain it, just that whatever that technique's called it's working beautifully. XDD
| RenkonNairu chapter 1 . 12/2/2007
| James Birdsong chapter 1 . 12/1/2007
*applauds* Nifty perhaps. Not terrible. Not real bad. Perhaps real good.