This is an amzing story. Can't wait to read next one.

YOU ARE AN AMAZING WRITER! DON'T EVER STOP!

James fell in lOve with Lily too fast. That's my opinion, otherwise this is pretty great. There are also a lot of mistakes :)

Amazing story! The sequel will probably be AMAZING too!

voldemort have sex with lily?a mudblood?thats not like was why didnt lily and voldemort have sex?it would have been better:\ :( i love the idea anyway bye

(it would have been better if voldemort and lily did have sex thou)

hi i bet the story is really good cause this capter is:)but this is the only revive youll get cause i dont write revies

:\but its good so far and i bet the rest of it is.:D

why in "even the angels fall" , the father and mother of James potter changed?

okay so umm, i kinda love this story but i'd just like to say that the last chapter had me rolling. I think the idea of VOLDEMORT raping lily (or anyone for that matter) is completely ridiculous. :') I mean, VOLDEMORT? For one thing, lily's a mudblood! I think that voldemort would honestly rather kill himself than sleep with a mudblood. And RAPE? I'm pureettyy sure voldemort wouldnt physically force anyone to do anything. Its below him. He'd really do what lily suggested and use the imperious curse. adn finally, Voldemort with kids? Umm,, no! Evil kid or not, he's just not compassionate enough. Omg that was just so wrongg :'D I just kept telling myself that this cant POSSIBLE be happening. Voldemort did not just "crawl into bed beside Lily". He didn't just kiss her neck. LOLOLOLOL okay I'm gonna stop now. But truly, I was expeting some CRUCIO action, you know?

I don't blame you though. It's pretty hard to find a writer who can grasp voldemorts personality like JK.R. Voldemort doesn't talk to people like equals. I know he teases sometimes but it's evil teasing, not friendly teasing. He uses magic for probably EVERYTHING.

I love it.

Hullo ... just found your story ... great story by the way! Loved the way Lily and the gang are friends ... because in most fics they hate each other ... so this is a great change ... hope you will not make them hate each other now! The way James sees her actually sees her for the first time ... and the way Sirius knows! Now ill see your other chapters ...

You changed Sirius' middlename. It was Kent in one of the other chapters.

Well...

Overall, it is a good story. It seems slightly undeveloped, though, and I think that Lily seems very... over the top a lot of times. I honestly think that she overreacted in unrealistic ways.

Obviously, the story would be a lot different now, since all of the books are now out. So, unfortunately, a lot of fanfics are now outdated. Kind of sucks, but oh well.

I think your characterization of Dumbledore could use some work, too.

But I really liked how you developed the relationships between Sirius, Remus, James and Lily. I thought that was really good.

I HAD SO MUCH FUN READING THIS FIC! OMG! *takes breathe* sory, I had to get that out. OMG IT WAS SO GOOD! *had to get that out to** I want a sequal! A real sequal... the smie sequal, I'm going to read that now! Ekk! This was a realyy good one!

OMG...you were so right about Trelawney and the whole predicting...weird huh? this was very cute...nothing was wrong with it, I totally loved how Lily got new robes...that was funny...keep writing.

~Charlotte

Its good D