Reviews for The Kuni at the Tomb
BornUndead chapter 1 . 1/29/2011
I was not expecting this when I apathetically began to browse over the story. But it caught my attention.

I am quite surprised. Of late it seems most stories I've been reading are rather lacking and frankly awful.

You really made a full circle that was enjoyable, not predictable, and based off of the actual game's history. I am quite happy I found this piece.

You really portrayed a Kuni Witch Hunter well. They are not known for being cheery or overly happy, of course one would have to truly dig through their duties to find any reason for optimism.

I truly felt for the sister, seeing as I have seen almost an exact reenactment in reality. You truly captured at least a smidgen of the human condition.

Bravo!
legendofX chapter 1 . 2/4/2008
Very nice, good lesson, good characterization of the clans, very nice. Only suggestion I can make is that it's a bit heavy on the modern slang for an L5R story. But all in all, it was a good read.