This was really great! It sounds simple at the start but then you really get into the stream of consciousness of it and it's just wow in its simplicity. I'm glad I read this.

Aww god, don't make me cry.

I love your story, despite it deviating from canon in its current state. Its a nice story that provides a snapshot into their relationship and ties it up very well. It's almost like poetry in a way. 3

Ugh, this is wonderful. I love Minato and Kushina and this captures my headcanon of them so well. Thank you for sharing with us.

Can you write an alternate universe based on this fic that doesn't end in so much sad-suckiness like canon does? ;_; * tears * Please?

oh ouch, ouch. it hurts, my heart hurts.
thank you. keep up the good work.
...even tho you posted this in 2007 and probs won't even see this

I've read this before, years ago, and it continues to be powerful. Thanks for putting so much emotion in your writing and sharing with us all.

Such cute! Melts my heart.

My. I don't think I have anything to say. I don't think that there is anything left to say that is full of fluffy, happy thoughts. You've put them all in this one-shot, you see.

Sorry, but I found a typo: He decides once again that Rin is favorite one day, because she's the only one of them who's not touched in the head ...

Thank you for posting this. Oh, and freckles are awesome. Yes. ;)

Took a while for him to realize it...
:)

Lovely (:

What a ride! It was up and down and I loved the whole thing. Thank you.

Beautiful!

So sweet...

This story is absolutely beautiful. To be honest, I haven't read that much fanfic including Minato without all the gore and angst and oh yeah I'm super powerful, come at me babe. I don't regret reading this. It was sweet, and sad. It's a wonderful mix. I hope you write some more. I really love how you manipulate your characters' and your readers' emotions.