Reviews for Oranges
recey2010 chapter 1 . 12/4/2014
Perfect!
Midnight Insomniac chapter 1 . 11/28/2011
LOL! XD Tenten is such a boss. :P

Keep writing!

~M.I.
Galimaufry chapter 1 . 11/8/2009
...oranges. I'm eaing one right now...if only I had Negi here to flick them at...this was very funny, I enjoyed it quite a bit!
Nerd4eva chapter 1 . 5/16/2009
Lol! Loved it! Awesome job! P
Ishasuki Mitochi chapter 1 . 12/16/2008
Yay! Peacemaker Tenten saves the day. She's the "Peace- through superior firepower" type, isn't she? Quite a dangerous young woman.
timcampy101 chapter 1 . 8/3/2008
oh oh oh oh my giggle giggle this is great good job
Yugao chapter 1 . 12/26/2007
Haha. This made me laugh. Good job.

~ yugao.
kellymarianandanne chapter 1 . 12/22/2007
ha ha ha ha ha...you're my favorite
with eyes looking up chapter 1 . 12/8/2007
Ah! That was funny- I liked it!

Good job!

Ja ne, Kiko
N.I London chapter 1 . 12/5/2007
I thought it was fantastic! One problem however is you go between present and past tense. Just watch that! Read mine!
anthropomorphychan chapter 1 . 12/4/2007
*snort* *snort* *a small giggle* *giggles more* *giggles uncontrolably* *lets out a full blown laugh* *falls of chair laughing* *rolling around on the carpet with tears running down eyes*

geez that was funny. Loved the line at the end about the turtles.

~morphy
imissmycupcake chapter 1 . 12/2/2007
I love it XD

very good oneshot for the both of them, and (gasp) in character!
Vanilla Cinnamon chapter 1 . 12/2/2007
Okay, you get credit for this; I almost died laughing, that final line is just too perfect.

Good luck, and hopefully I'll see more of your Neji/Tenten works. You're good at depicting them.